Accalia

[potcsues]

It saddens me that today's author has also written a Codename: Kids Next Door Sue. Is nothing safe?

TITLE: Accalia
CULPRIT: Warrior-Angel113
SUMMARY: "Accalia was born a normal girl with a normal life before her a great event caused her to hate sea folk for like ever. Now a theif stealing from the imfamous Jack Sparrow will turn out to be quite a

Comments

*laughing*

[wicked_grin]

..Accalia sat in the darkest corner of the Blue town bazaar. Someone help me out... The what?

I think a bazaar is a marketplace. I had a video game that once used the word "bazaar".

“I don’t think you would let a little girl starve would you?” She frowned and gripped the hat."Please, sir- let me eat you hat"

Re: *laughing*

[potcsues]

Oh, I know what a bazaar is. I was trying to figure out what or where "Blue town" is.

Re: *laughing*

[ganeris]

It's in Pokemon, isn't it? Between Fuschia City and the Cinnabar Islands?

This story leaves me speechless, otherwise. Usually I can come up with a snappy comeback, but not this time. I just...

*stares blankly at the story*

Nope, I got nothin'.

Re: *laughing*

[potcsues]

Ah-Hah! So it's the crossfandom!fangirl version of Cerulean City!

Why didn't I see it before?

*looks around*

Not that I... know anything about Pokemon or anything.

*whistles innocently*

[mylla]

I'm boggling at this sentence from the first chapter:

Accalia slept well that night, maybe even forgetting that her parents had died from sea folk, but I doubt it.

Died from sea folk? Is that like a new disease or something?

[sharkcowsheep]

Little did you suspect. It's also called "mermaid pox"--apparently you can catch it from ingesting tropical seawater containing their tiny, near-invisible eggs. First you suffer a high fever and stomach upset. This lasts for about 18 hours.

...and then the sea folk larvae claw their way out of your intestines through your abdomen. It's usually fatal. Very sad.

[mylla]

Golly, the things you learn from reading potcsues.

Actually, I think I've heard of that one. Isn't that the one that completes its life cycle by crawling onto the nearest small girl and turning her into a super-irritating creature who mixes up homonyms, uses anachronistic curse words and emits an aura that makes people around her act in an illogical fashion?

That one's nasty.

[farmercuerden]

I'll just bet this Suethor has seen Disney's Aladdin too many times... either that, or stole bits from an Aladdin fic.

[youko_riki]

Looking around she realized that she was far away from her stashing area. “Sir. Can you tell me where the food stands are?” She asked. The man smiled and pointed down an ally. “’Bout two and a half yards down that ally miss."

"Two and a half yards" (e.g. 7.5 feet) is "far away"? Someone wasn't paying attention in sixth grade math class. I didn't even read past this. It was just too painful.