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Natalia Jihanson and Sasha

Jan 24, 2004 14:21

Double-Sue. Of the "I Want To Be With Orlando Will And Johnny Jack! To Hell With Canon!" variety.

Oh and I added "Plot" as a field since I always include it anyway.

TITLE: For Life, For Love
CULPRIT: Mistress Natalia Same name as Sue. Never a good sign.
SUMMARY: "Natalia and Sasha feel they are destined for lives neither of them wants. What ( Read more... )

Comments 16

She's not okay, technically or otherwise. araeph January 24 2004, 14:19:27 UTC

First of all, a bit of shameless self promotion.

The PPC Department of Technical Errors is up! Read the prologue here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1699727

By all means, read and review! Tear my story to shreds, if you like. I'm always looking for improvement. I suggest you put a slash mark after the link, since I had to fix my italics.

Now, about the errors: flaws in logic are something the PPC looks for as well as abuse of the common comma and weird linguistic aberrations. Anamaria's disappearance is a phenomenon known as "vanishing down a plot hole". Anamaria needs to be retrieved and set loose on the original female character(s).

A Sue doesn't need to be convicted of capital crimes to be killed. They're called capital crimes because they automatically merit a PPCing, regardless of the number of crimes committed ( ... )

Re: She's not okay, technically or otherwise. potcsues January 24 2004, 16:29:57 UTC

Oh. Sweet mother of Eru...

That's horrific.

I had something else to say... but I think my brain experienced a minor crash after reading that.

Ow 5p00k3ym0ivk3y January 24 2004, 14:35:01 UTC

Twitch. Just. Twitch.

ducklingsurveys January 24 2004, 16:46:35 UTC

My God, how many people in the 18th century named Natalia or Natalie or something are there?!

bulldogface January 25 2004, 05:15:46 UTC

No! That's my name! *headdesk headdesk HEADDESK*

kozi345 January 24 2004, 19:18:55 UTC

jewnruwhrnwir

DAMN WRITER.

Raped my girlfriend's name. ;___; ...Besides. I don't even think Sasha is a historically correct name. ^^; Same with Natalia. That sounds Russian...and Sasha is also a boy's name in Russia, just spelt differently, I believe.

BUT STILL. That boils my egg.

starvingartist3 January 25 2004, 12:31:16 UTC

ARRGHTXWEES

It's like....dyam, everytime I drop by here, Sue authors bust out the same hackneyed "Nice girl whose either a ho or about to get married off runs off and hooks up with Jack/Will. Where's the originality? Did they kill that along with canon as well?

Someone, fetch me a spork-gun. I have some Sues to take care of.