Lies, Sex, and Genes Part 17

[premerseahshiko]

Title: Lies... 17
Characters: Feilong, Yanzhui, Mikhail, Tao
Disclaimer: Actual characters are not mine.
Warning: Lots of angst, some OOC, very long... may cause some depression.

LIES, SEX, AND GENES Part 17

Eight/ Nine years earlier
Liu Feilong crept into the target's office, dressed in a blood red cheongsum, his head lowered in submission to the

Comments

[yeeeeey]

Noooooooooooo!!!!!!! Poor Fire!!! is the poor thing going to suffer even more??? can't you just kill Yan? (I know I'm always saying this, but I really hate the guy!!!!)
I hope you have something other than Yan "having his way" with Fire...the poor thing!!!! *crying*

Thanks for the update...it really was big!! ^^

[premerseahshiko]

Sorry. Yan is kinda vital to the story so I cant kill him yet.

[yeeeeey]

I know...and I understand that...but can you kill him at some point?? Or "torture" him...or something that will hurt him!!!

[premerseahshiko]

That's a definite.

[kajornwan]

Oii. I'm speechless. *sighs* *cries* *tearing her hair out* That was...... intense. The action scenes were great. The scene with Fire & Ice had my mouth water for them but the best was the scene with Yan & Fei. It was heartbreaking. It must have been hell for Fire to have to go back to Yan, harder, for Ice knowing what his brother did to him and seeing Fire taken away right before his very eyes. But Fire confessed, ahh, two people he loved most of all, if only ice could read his mind. Gosh it makes me want to cry. I can't, I really can't wait for the next one. Yan is all hate but anything with him in it makes the story much more emotional and complicated. In that sense, I like him. He brings out the side of Fei that he doesn't normally show. Thank you so much for the long chapter. *hugs and kisses*

[yeeeeey]

yeah, I agree with you...Yan makes the story more..intense?
But isn't he horrible?? OMG I hate him, I usually like the characters that people should hate, but Yan...Oh God!!

[kajornwan]

I usually like villains too and might have liked Yan if he was hot with long hair (my absolute condition). He is horrible I know. Probably the one man who ruined Fei's life from the beginning even more so than Asami. I don't hate that he rapes Fei though (I get him, I want to rape Fei too *cries* Oh you beautiful, beautiful creature). I hate that he constantly tells him he's not good enough and insists on destroying Fei's self esteem. I could kill him for that.

[samalexa]

hahah! I agree with you.. hot villains with long hair definately get my vote! XD

Long hair is <3

Comment from your No. 1 Stalker!!!

[paranoia_woman]

Anticipation kept me checking the computer for your next chapter and when I checked this time finally there it was.
Happy Happy - Joy Joy.
At first I thought, actually it was more of a hope, that it was A disguised as Yan, but no it wasn't to be.
Great battle. I really enjoyed it. (Better than the characters did, I bet)
You end it with Ice shot and Puppy in shock or just unwilling to leave Fei. I wonder what Yan will do when or even if he discovers who Ice really is.
Thank you and I'll be Cing U later.

Re: Comment from your No. 1 Stalker!!!

[premerseahshiko]

"Happy Happy- Joy Joy" reminds me of that Ren & Stimpy song from when I was a kid.

I'm not sure if Fire & Ice will be back in chapter 18 or 19

Re: Comment from your No. 1 Stalker!!!

[paranoia_woman]

Yep, I loved watching that show. The original, not the later crap that came out.
That's fine. I'll diligently read at whatever pace you write. I've not been disappointed yet.

[mrk33]

You wrote great action scenes. I agree just kill Yan or better let A kill Yan. He is just pure evil.

[premerseahshiko]

I'm happy you liked the action scenes. But as I said before. Cant kill Yan yet. The story is about to become more complex.

[beschu4]

[premerseahshiko]

Sorry but this part was already long enough.