Lies, Sex, and Genes Part 22

Sep 01, 2007 21:01


Title: Lies... (22)
Characters: Fei, Yan, Tao, Mikhail
                       Mention of: Liu Sr.
Disclaimer: Actual characters belong to Yamane-sensei.

LIES, SEX, AND GENES Part 22

Noon
Fire awoke to find it was past noon according to the clock. Still in the daze of a blank dream, he turned over on his side to see if Puppy was out of bed yet or still ( Read more... )

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kajornwan September 2 2007, 01:25:31 UTC
Yay!!! finally, she updates!! Oii, rape scene. Gosh, can I say it? I'm gonna say it and get killed by your other readers. Err... *whispers*

I envy Yan

*runs*

Not kidding though. Gosh, Fei in captivity for me to do what I wish to him??? What the hell is that if not paradise *droolssssss* I'm horrible. *cries* But me want to ravish beautiful Fei too. Yan, dear, will you share?

Well, apart from my own selfish needs, that was rather sad. Poor Fei. You wrote that well. My heart was also heavy while I drooled that naked Fei. Poor thing (damn it Yan, if you're not gonna share then let him go already. Or at least use some lub!!).

Ice!! Hurry! Get the hell out and help your princess!! (and smex him into forgetting please!!)

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miershyk September 2 2007, 01:43:46 UTC
*softly* mom... where are you?

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~ me wants to share Fei to!!! wait, i'm just an uke... i shouldn't demand... =_=

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premerseahshiko September 2 2007, 03:01:25 UTC
'Yan, dear, will you share?' HA! Like Yan would share with anyone! Then again, if you had Fei would you want to share? ;)

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kajornwan September 2 2007, 04:10:33 UTC
Of course, I'll share him with Mik if Mik promises to ravish me in return!!! wa ha ha ha..

Misha, dear, do we have a deal or what?

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yeeeeey September 2 2007, 01:36:18 UTC
yeeeey!!! An update!!! ^^

well...I know I always say this, but I hate Yan!!
And I know someone is happy to "see" Fei without his pants, but I must say: "Poor Fire! And Poor Puppy".

Nice to see that Ice is almost free...Go Ice...Kill that bastard and...like everyone says: "smex Fei into submission"!!!

So glad that you updated!!! Thanks ^^

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premerseahshiko September 2 2007, 03:03:12 UTC
Yep Poor Fei & Tao, but they make the story more complex. Glad you liked it! :)

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miershyk September 2 2007, 01:41:57 UTC
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~ omg omg omg! i KNEW Yan was gonna do that horrible thing to Fei again... *criiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiies*

and gosh!!! i love Tao!!! i'm just so glad that he's with Fei and by his side... i'm sure Fei would have almost lost his sanity if it wasn't for Tao... and the part where Fei tried to hide the truth, and Tao already knowing part of the truth, makes it all the more sadder... woman, you made me cry at that part... T_T

and Mik!!! go Misha GO!!! break that bar and get out and kick ass!!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ thanks so much for the update!!! you're seriously getting better at this... cheers to your muse!!! ^_^

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premerseahshiko September 2 2007, 03:04:43 UTC
I realized that if Tao and Ice weren't captured with him, Fei would probably lash back or try to commit suicide.

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phoenix_dee September 2 2007, 03:21:15 UTC
WOW!! Very hard to read Fire having to go through that horror again... But it does give the story more depth. I'm ready to lynch Yan, so GO GO ICE!!!!! Great job and thanks for the update.^___^

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premerseahshiko September 2 2007, 03:46:50 UTC
Hard to read... That was even hard to write! O_O

Glad u liked! ;)

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90mcphee September 2 2007, 03:40:59 UTC
Poor Fire. (:( *sends death vibes against Yan* >:| (he dies) >:D Bwah-ha-ha-ha!

I really love your Tao, he's cute :3, but so smart too. Kids usually know far more than their parents think (or wish).

And here we go, the obligatory fangirl moment (we all have them)~ GO ICE!!! GO MIK!!! GO MISHA!!! GO MIKHAIL!!! GO SAVE YOUR BELOVED!!! RESCUE YOUR FUTURE UKE (and son)!!! AND GUT YAN LIKE A FISH!!!... *ahem*... That's all, I'm done. :)

Thank you for the update! This was the perfect end to a stressful day! ^_~

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90mcphee September 2 2007, 03:42:53 UTC
P.S.
Please ignore my insanity, this is how I get when I'm stressed.
*sigh* Sorry, and thanks again for sharing. ^_^

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premerseahshiko September 2 2007, 03:47:35 UTC
I'm glad I could relieve some of your stress. :D

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