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Jul 17, 2009 22:30


For Sale  ||  jiyong/seungri  ||

It was midnight on a Tuesday evening when Jiyong decided he needed a vacation from his own head.

it's kind of ridiculous, he thinks. falling in love. )

fic: jiyong/seungri

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veritas_vincit_ July 17 2009, 16:14:55 UTC
i just.
there's words that i use and you use the same ones, but you string them together so pretty.

i realize that made ZERO sense but this was beautiful and i had to stop and walk around at some parts because i just couldn't handle it all at once. it was just so rich with feeling and sadness and there was hope and sweet lord. i realize this comment is really incoherent and i'm sorry but GOD this was amazing.

def. memming this one and i hope you write more, i honestly do.

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pretty_yellow July 18 2009, 07:10:23 UTC
i. /blush. you're words kinda really made my day. like, unbelievably so.

thank you so, so much and i definitely intend to try my hand at some more g-ri fics.

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veritas_vincit_ July 17 2009, 16:52:27 UTC
and holy crap you write brendon/ryan fic.

*swoons*

may i add you??

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pretty_yellow July 18 2009, 07:10:41 UTC
/added you back!

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ai_fantasy9 July 17 2009, 17:05:45 UTC
This...is really really good. You should also post this on GDheartri where I am sure MORE people will enjoy this beautifully well written story.

Seriously. I'm not kidding. This is GOOD (I don't say that a lot).

Imma saving this.

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pretty_yellow July 18 2009, 08:58:20 UTC
i took your advice and posted at gdheartri =)

thank you so much for your kindness and your vote of confidence!

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pumadragon July 17 2009, 21:08:15 UTC
I love this. Even though Seungri is overconfident, if anything, you made his insecurities and everything seem believable, and this is so, so pretty. Just... a lot of prettiness in this fic, even though it's about such ugly, ugly things.

Guh. It hurts, but I love it.

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pumadragon July 17 2009, 21:09:59 UTC
ALSO, FIGHT CLUB QUOTES OWN EVERYTHING IN LIFE. SO JUST. YESSSSSSSSS.

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pretty_yellow July 18 2009, 07:16:43 UTC
holy shit. holy shit.

YOU GOT THAT!? /cries laughing.

i swear to god that line slipped out of nowhere. i didn't even plan it. i was like, hey~

fight club references are always relevant =P

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pumadragon July 18 2009, 07:21:34 UTC
OF COURSE.

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parkchoongjae July 18 2009, 04:38:22 UTC
what the ...
THIS IS AWESOMEEEEEEEE.
OMG. I need to leave for work. I will write you a better comment later. but this will definitely bookmarked in my fave fics of all time. OMG.

how can you write so well? gaah. and so realistic it made me cry. :(

swear, i'll give you a better comment later.

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pretty_yellow July 18 2009, 07:18:56 UTC
this comment is good enough, trust me!

your kindness makes me so happy i could cry. i'm so glad i could convey what i was feeling well enough to make you cry. i just. speechless.

thank you!!

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