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[pretty_yellow]

For Sale  ||  jiyong/seungri  ||

It was midnight on a Tuesday evening when Jiyong decided he needed a vacation from his own head.

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[loveariddle_16]

this is so beautiful, i was sobbing halfway in dread that it would end up sad. but it didn't thankfully and ilu for it. seriously this is so lovely and the characteristics are so believable that it hurts. and i have no more words, so, mem'd ♥

[pretty_yellow]

i didn't even contemplate having it end sadly, to be honest.

i just couldn't do that shit, truthfully. seungri sick is hard enough, seungri dead... no.

the fact that you used the word believable makes me so unbelievably happy.

[bluemonkiesx]

that was...beyond anything I've ever read.

It was beautiful and amazing and heart-wrenching and uplifting and so many other things all at the same time.

And I don't know how you wrote this, but I really hope you write more because like I said, this was just beyond anything I've ever read and I know I'm repeating myself but this was just soo beautifully written and oh my god.

I'm incoherent, I'm sorry.
But I loved this, and I'm memming it.

[pretty_yellow]

waa~ i love your big bang fics so much!! so, so much.

and i just keep reading your review over and over again because it doesn't stop making me blush in happiness.

thank you so much, i say that from the bottom of my heart. you words mean everything to me.

[bluemonkiesx]

wah! which ones of mine?!
Dx
haha.

And I think I've probably read this like, maybe 3-4 times already tonight? Srsly, this was really amazing.

[pretty_yellow]

your g-ri fics kill me with brilliance.

i was actually really hoping you'd review actually. not even kidding.

i'm grinning like such a maniac right now.

[moldface]

reading this was like watching Untamed Heart for the first time again ♥

[pretty_yellow]

i haven't seen it! /hides.

but i'm taking it as a compliment =P

xx

[moldface]

wut
wut
wut
wut
wut
BLASPHEMY.
Just kidding. It's a good movie that practically oozes cliche themes, but that doesn't transfer into your writing.
I'm just a sap. For corny movies and really good writing like your own ♥♥~

[pretty_yellow]

sorry!!

i'm so lame. i'll check it out (doubtfull that my shitty video-rental will have it though probs...)

i wiki'd it. it was positively- reviewed as. 'hopelessly syrupy, preposterous and more than a little bit lame'. i'm quite happy with that. pretty accurate, truth be told, i think =)

[haelin]

SPOT!

[menra]

^In this space, you could insert variations of all the other comments saying that the story was beautiful, heartwrenching, memorable, realistic, raw (because it was); but I think being speechless would best describe how I feel right now. *Added to memories.* You're an amazing author. HOPE HOPE HOPE to see more G-Ri from you. <3

[pretty_yellow]

o blush!

thank you so much for your kindness. i must look completely mental with the grin i'm wearing at the moment =)

i have every intention to write more g-ri<3

[menra]

Woo<3 I'm holding you to that. (;

Also I wanted to add that I absolutely love your characterizations in here. They're spot-on o__o Especially Tae's, I can so see him being the supportive guardian angel that he is in your fic... How do you get to know their character so well??

[pretty_yellow]

i kinda love taeyang, to be honest. i imagine him as the band's quite backbone, people don't often think about it but they never stop needing it.

and i think ji defs needed a backbone of support in this story.

thanks!