Comments | princess_george: On the Couch

princess_george

On the Couch

Aug 09, 2011 20:14

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From a prompt in leslie_ben - specifically leslie-ben.livejournal.com/146217.html here. Thanks for the encouragement, rikyl ! (This wasn't betaed, though.)

( What if Chris slept through the night like a normal person? What would have happened on his couch? )

parks and recreation, leslie/ben

Comments 12

rikyl August 10 2011, 00:57:30 UTC

I'm so glad you wrote this! You already had me laughing in the first paragraph with Leslie analyzing the fact that Ben brought a toothbrush, but then the sexual tension in this was exquisite. I loved the tiny little scenes we saw in Road Trip, and you did a really nice job drawing those out and keeping the same tone. Great job!

sullen_aquarian August 10 2011, 01:43:21 UTC

This was just lovely, and makes me even madder at Chris and his tiny bladder.

sassynach August 10 2011, 02:01:43 UTC

Eeek, so much delicious tension!!

I love this part: It reminded Leslie of that time when she asked him to dinner, just before she tried internet dating for, like, five disastrous minutes. Now she gets it.
I loved that little Ben moment and like how you tied it all together.

Stupid Chris ruining everything!! Argggh.

americnxidiot August 10 2011, 03:53:21 UTC

He was dying to kiss her. That's all he could think. It's not even fair to say he was thinking about kissing her - he just had this thought, of kissing her, and that's where it stopped. He wasn't thinking about anything beyond or around or beside kissing her. Not sex, not really even touching her while he was kissing her, not what would happen after he kissed her. Just her lips on his, that was it, that was the entire content of his head.

oh man, this is perfect. i loved this.

craponaspatula August 10 2011, 04:35:41 UTC

Adorable. I love them both with their malfunctioning brains.