My chapter doesn't flow?

[princessfics]

Soooo.....

I've gotten a couple of reviews now that have said something along the lines of...it's not your best, or, it doesn't flow as well....for the latest chapter of Protection (20).  I'm not looking for an ego boost of, oh no, they're wrong and you're wonderful ;-)...I'm just genuinely curious about what is different with this chapter - if

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[razzberry_11]

oh and i can veiw the version of 19 but not of 20?...why so? is it some error?

[winchley]

I did think that the flow was different, but that it more reflected the frantic turns in the storyline than a change in writing style. On re-reading the continuity was more evident since I was no longer on tenterhooks trying to second guess the next scene.

I like it, it's good :-)