Comments | princesshimchan: constellations

princesshimchan

constellations | himdae

Feb 27, 2013 21:16

title: constellations
rating: pg
word count: 1341
warnings: none
summary: himchan flies among the constellations; daehyun is left in awe.

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rating: pg, pairing: himdae, b.a.p

Comments 15

inanekpop February 28 2013, 02:43:59 UTC

i like the subtlety of it--it's very nicely disjointed and i like the choppiness of the pace it is v sweet even though it is sad u‿u✿
(i just realized i have like one b.a.p icon oops)

princesshimchan February 28 2013, 02:45:51 UTC

thanks, boo. that's what i was going for
you get me, na i mean

(i'm disappointed miSS CAPJOE)

inanekpop February 28 2013, 02:48:03 UTC

sorry u cant handle this jelly
(ure welcome)

princesshimchan February 28 2013, 02:53:08 UTC

disgusting tbh

(im not thank anymore)

blackheart_lies February 28 2013, 14:15:40 UTC

sad.
angsty.
but wrapped up in a blanket of love.
:)

i liked this.

princesshimchan March 1 2013, 02:08:14 UTC

thank you! i was going for sad and angsty, i'm glad i did (kinda??)

irmavep777 March 5 2013, 19:36:04 UTC

my sweet himdae Q___Q
♥

but... I don't get it... it broke my heart to pieces... but...was Himchan even there? was he real?

princesshimchan March 5 2013, 21:15:27 UTC

mmm, himchan is technically dead, but daehyun just sort of imagines him there. himchan's like a spirit in this? and he's a manifestation of daehyun's regrets and untold feelings hehe

irmavep777 March 6 2013, 07:30:58 UTC

oh my god....... TTT___TTT *cries a river*

ext_392023 March 6 2013, 04:52:09 UTC

wow~ this was so beautiful i loved it!!! *^^* it made me really sad but i'm really glad i read it!!!

princesshimchan March 9 2013, 19:11:53 UTC

thank you!!!

dddaehyun March 10 2013, 00:23:55 UTC

This is really beautifully written, omfg.

It feels a bit like, in the beginning Himchan is actually there. Like, as a living person. Then at "... and before he got a reply, himchan left", this (for me) is not only Himchan walking away in that moment, but also leaving completely, as in dying, because the next line goes "that's the only time they've ever spoken to each other". Then Daehyun mentions non-verbally talking to Himchan and (again, for me) this is already when he starts seeing Himchan's spirit/ghost/?, you know ( ... )

princesshimchan March 18 2013, 19:23:27 UTC

sorry for the late reply!

and wow! thank you for your lovely comment. i was completely blown away!! you really analyzed this omg that's so flattering thank you!!!