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proteus_unbound

Lessons from La Fontaine (1/1)

Jan 18, 2011 16:45

Oh, lord. My muse is not letting me get anything done today.

Title: Lessons from La Fontaine
Characters/Pairings: Serena. Hints of Nate/Serena.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Minor spoilers
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: Life is hard, but she tries, she tries, she tries. Serena in boarding school.

( Somewhere, sometime, she'll actually be the heroine of a story. )

gossip girl fic, serena van der woodsen

Comments 5

singyouhome January 19 2011, 23:12:33 UTC

you, you, you.... just, stop blowing my mind already. it can't handle it.

(The moral: the trip is too short, and it takes something more than Connecticut to wash away the aftertaste of guilt.) - this. is. amazing.

One night, she dreams this: Chuck fixes her, Blair forgives her, Nate loves her, and she is the same.

She wakes up and she throws up twice because her chest feels like it might explode.

(The moral: in her nightmares, Chuck is Pete, Blair is Georgina, Nate isn’t there, and she is the same.) You are a genius, i mean it. "the moral" thing thorughout the peice was sooo good.

Stay amazing, pretty please?

♥

proteus_unbound January 19 2011, 23:24:06 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you! Sorry about your mind though, lol. I wasn't really sure about this one, mainly because I was worried that "the moral" parts would come off as kinda pretentious, so I'm glad you liked it!

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proteus_unbound January 20 2011, 19:10:32 UTC

Thanks!

illuminanted February 4 2011, 22:18:57 UTC

WOW! This is SOOO amazing!!! I love it! ♥
You just get Serena SOOO well!!! And the moral parts were very clever and added soo much to the fic and the mood, IMO. :)))
I can't wait to read more of your stuffs! :)))

proteus_unbound February 5 2011, 00:26:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.