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Jul 23, 2005 15:21

mommy
why is the sky on fire?
to protect you
son

it seems to me poetry
has become selfish
the audience lies at the authors mercy

why must i be
confined to the
confine of personal experience?
is it because i am in love with famous?
do i really want to be truthful?

too much thinking for me

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post within a post talonxpool July 24 2005, 06:50:19 UTC
Really lately
Its been like liquid
The sky, the earth, peoples personalities mostly

I am afraid of some things
But...who isn't

I think maybe if I grab onto something I believe in
Others will come along for the ride
When they see how much I care

Really though
I am lonely right now

Not relationship-wise
But socialy

I have plenty of great friends
But nobody who believes in what I believe in

Thats Anarchy
Not Anomie

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Trap casbur August 6 2005, 07:17:37 UTC
The confine of personal experience is something that traps us all...I hate it as much as you, I think that is why I want to be other people sometimes. I just think about all the other realities which exist and wish I could know them all.

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