Fic: In the Shadows (4/?)

Oct 23, 2005 18:17

Title: In the Shadows (4 ( Read more... )

in the shadows

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captainquervo October 24 2005, 00:56:35 UTC
Chapter four, finally. You didn't know I was reading it. Haha, really entertaining though. Keep up the good work.

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prowlingnight October 24 2005, 01:02:11 UTC
Thank you. And nice icon.

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whitedestiny1x2 October 24 2005, 03:09:49 UTC
Argh, I don't know if I said this in my comment for last chapter, but the Firehawk's computer scares me. Like, the whole mystery about it creeps me out, and I actually look around me to see if there's something "out of place." >< *cowers in fear* Seriously, should I be scared? Is there a creepy alien/ghost thingy going to kill Anakin and Obi-Wan? *gets scared of own questions* Ack . . . I need a teddybear.

Anyway, thank you, thank you for updating! ^^ Love this fic so far and wonderful job! *swoons*

Oops, I noticed one thing though:
“Great, just great. I’m going to have to replace all of this now, you know,” he whinged, pushing himself to his feet. Unless "whinged" is a word, then wo0t, I learned something new. Anyway, I can't wait until next chapter! :3

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whitedestiny1x2 October 24 2005, 03:11:33 UTC
Omg . . . I didn't know "whigned" is a word. o_O *slaps self*

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whitedestiny1x2 October 24 2005, 03:12:06 UTC
Crap, I need an edit button. "Whinged."

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prowlingnight October 24 2005, 03:50:54 UTC
Hee, thank you! I'm glad that the computer bits are kinda creepy. They're meant to be. And yes, there is a reason for what's happening with the Firehawk, but it won't get explained til much later on. Sorry. *hides*

Yeah, 'whinged' is a word. *g* Mostly a British word. But it seemed to match Anakin in that moment just a bit better than 'whined' did. ;)

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anakin415 October 24 2005, 03:10:38 UTC
Thank the maker an update. My poor Anakin, he projects sooo loudly. I could not stop laughing over the "Reflective Silence" That was hillarious. Keep it coming, when you can that is.

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prowlingnight October 24 2005, 03:53:46 UTC
Thank you! It sounded amusing in my head when I pictured Anakin saying it. *nodnod* Glad it was amusing to others, too.

I intend to get another chapter out by this time next week. It's plotted, just not written. Hopefully everything will cooperate and I'll be able to do some fic typin' in the next couple of days. *crosses fingers*

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_silverleaf_ October 24 2005, 12:46:41 UTC
Whee! You have no idea how much I'm enjoying this! I actually do a happy-dance everytime you've updated. This has quickly become one of my favourite stories, and it isn't even slash! Yet?

Anakin with crazy hair and amused!Obi-wan is the funniest thing today. Heee! *loves like wh0a*

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prowlingnight October 24 2005, 20:54:35 UTC
Eee, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this story so much. *does a little dance, too* And it is preslash. ;) It may get a little more...overt...by the end of the story. I haven't decided yet, since I've got the sequel already in mind.

The whole 'you look like you stuck your finger in a power socket' was cracking me up while I wrote it! Yay for my sense of humor amusing other people!

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mimesh October 25 2005, 00:19:00 UTC
Hi from a first time commenter.

I just want to let you know how much I enjoy this story. Like everyone said before you captured them and especially their banter brilliantly. Can't wait to read more. :D

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prowlingnight October 25 2005, 01:13:31 UTC
Hello, first time commenter! *grins* I'm glad you found your way over here and that you're enjoying the boys and their banter so far. ;)

(On an aside, your username, is it a...well, a name? It almost looks/sounds Ancient Egyptian to me.)

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mimesh October 25 2005, 19:31:33 UTC
Well, if it is a (real/ancient) name that's a coincidence. I just tried to think up something short and unique. :)

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prowlingnight October 25 2005, 21:33:32 UTC
I do like it, whether it's real or ancient. *g*

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