Fic: Workaholic

Dec 11, 2009 02:03

Title: Workaholic
Author: ozsaur
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Warnings: None
Word Count: 3,046
Summary: Established relationship. Brendan has some adjustments to make.

Notes: For forcryinoutloud. This didn't turn out quite the way I expected, but I hope you enjoy it anyway. Big thanks to trillingstar for an excellent beta, especially at the last minute. You rock, sweetie! All ( Read more... )

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tarlanx December 11 2009, 11:51:01 UTC
OH! I was so worried for a moment! Thankfully Brendan worked it out in the end! with a little help from Emmett!

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ozsaur December 11 2009, 15:39:39 UTC
Thank you! Brendan always struck me as being a workaholic and I figured that would turn out to be a problem in a relationship.

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stclare December 11 2009, 12:45:49 UTC
The trials of living with someone constantly on call, does make for some huge rows. It took me ages to get to where Emmett is in this, I used to constantly wonder where my hubby was. It was nice to see this take on there relashionship. Im glad Brendan got his head out of his a** though!

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ozsaur December 11 2009, 15:43:35 UTC
Thank you! I figured Emmett would be very Zen about Brendan working late and running off at a moments notice. I thought it might be interesting if Brendan turned out to be the one having a problem with it.

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forcryinoutloud December 11 2009, 13:06:13 UTC
THANK YOU! This was wonderful!

This For all that he was easy-going when awake, he slept like he was at war with the covers every night made me laugh out loud. *grins*

I loved this little glimpse into their lives and I could very easily see it happening like this, Brendan getting so caught up in work (though I could just as easily see it happening from Emmett's side too - they both have workaholic written all over them *snerk*) and being frustrated by it and taking it out on Emmett. I'm so glad you gave Brendan the wake up call he needed. *G*

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ozsaur December 11 2009, 15:52:34 UTC
I'm so glad you like the story. I wasn't sure it would work, but I wanted to show the struggles of a new relationship.

I have no doubt that Emmett could be just as much a workaholic as Brendan, he is dedicated to his research.

The ending didn't quite turn out the way I expected, so I'm happy it worked for you!

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forcryinoutloud December 11 2009, 16:35:33 UTC
Oh it definitely worked. :D

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melagan December 11 2009, 13:15:12 UTC
*Hugs boys* They really sound like guys here with all the misunderstandings that go with it. Whew, glad Brendan figured it out!

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ozsaur December 11 2009, 15:55:45 UTC
Thank you! The ending wasn't quite what I expected, so I'm glad it worked out.

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rellan December 12 2009, 05:55:59 UTC
As much as I love fluffy, happy stories, it's nice to read where the characters have real relationship problems and work them out.

Good job! :)

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ozsaur December 13 2009, 00:52:06 UTC
Thank you! First time stories are fun to do, but it's a nice change to write a story with an established relationship. I'm glad it worked!

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