Withdrawal

[psyphilosopher]

A/R MOL ENTRY

October 22, 2007

Author’s Notes:

There are no Season 4 spoilers, but everything up to “Crossroads II” is game, especially “Fragged.”  The phrase “doors of perception” is borrowed from The Doors of Perception by Aldous Huxley, who, in turn, borrowed it from William Blake’s The Marriage of Heaven and Hell.  Jim Morrison is not involved

Comments

[ceridwyn2]

Very nice. I really liked how you build this story and the emotions between both of them. Though it starts with the chamalla, it's really so much more.

[caramelapples11]

This was plain beautiful. You made my crappy day a hell of a lot better. Thank you for that.

[deepforestowl]

yummy! Very well done, in character. Totally a conversation I could see happening between the two of them. Great job!

[flamingo55]

Wow, that was beautiful. I could absolutely see that conversation happening. Scratch that, your writing is so descriptive that I DID see that conversation happening.

And the phrase "bullet-imposed sabbatical" is pure genius.

[nylecopolis]

great job! so in character and the pacing's just right. Thank you