Return to Liberty Avenue - Episode One

[puddle_jumper2]

 I'm a little early but I'm sure you'll forgive me for that ;)

Without any further ado, I bring you Episode One of Return to Liberty Avenue.

Enjoy and I can't wait to read your reviews...

So... as the song goes...

Pittsburgh, PA

Michael’s POV

The thing you have to understand is this; not everyone can just end a part of their life one day and start a new

Comments

[alasse]

Hi!
Wow. What an intense first episode. I loved it. First of all, I loved how you kept the ensemble sense of the series, giving sections to everyone, letting us know where they've been. I also loved that Michael introduced the episode, very reminiscent of the series.
I really liked the story lines starting, they all have a lot of potential... Brian having cancer again, but this time, allowing Justin to be there from the beginning, Ben being a lot more sick, Drew and Emmett... but, Debbie. God, it broke my heart. She's really a mother to them all, a pillar, a home. I loved Brian's words in the hosptial room, they were vulnerable and just right.
Everyone is really in character.
Really loved this first episode, can't wait for the second one :)

Hugs,
Arlad

P.s. If you need a beta, drop me a comment or e-mail me at: blackened_sky9@hotmail.com

[rosy5000]

Wow! You didn't even give us a chance catch our breath before throwing everything at us!

I like that it starts in present day and we get the recap from Michael on everything going on. And you got Hunter going to Penn State! *grins* My fave college (football team). lol

Nice to see how everyone's changed and grew. You had me crying about Debbie though. *sniffles* :(

Looking forward to more. :D

[pfodge]

Such a great beginning. Very intense. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I love the back ground information on what has been going on in everyones live. A lot of powerful emotions in this first episode. Looking forward to more.

Patty

[moviebuff83]

OH, Wow! Such a great chapter. I was crying through out the whole episode. I'm so glad that Brian got over his cancer. But, Debbie and Carl is just a whole other story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Hugs,
Carlina

[darkangel40]

Wow, this chapter was amazing. Although I must admit my eyes got all watery when i red about Debbie being hurt. I really like this story and I can't wait to read more