Return to Liberty Avenue - Episode One

Oct 04, 2007 21:40

 I'm a little early but I'm sure you'll forgive me for that ;)

Without any further ado, I bring you Episode One of Return to Liberty Avenue.

Enjoy and I can't wait to read your reviews...

So... as the song goes...

Pittsburgh, PA

Michael’s POV

The thing you have to understand is this; not everyone can just end a part of their life one day and start a new ( Read more... )

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marilla_pm67 October 5 2007, 08:01:01 UTC
Alright ... what can I say...

Powerful, Wonderful, sad, Sorry I don't have coherent words to express what I feel, it's just so ... so..

Well thanks. Can't wait for more.
Sam

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shadownyc October 5 2007, 11:51:26 UTC
WOW! Talk about starting with a bang. This was excellent and I found all the voices in character and true to canon.

I like how you started with Michael's monologue. That was a perfect touch and allowed us to catch up and understand the setting 2 years later.

Once I got over all the emotions brought out in this chapter I realized I absolutely can't wait for the next one!!!

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hccmain October 5 2007, 12:06:08 UTC
OMFG! This was an intense episode! You had me crying almost all the way through it. As much as I cried, I want more! Good episode!

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grneyedwoman October 5 2007, 13:55:41 UTC
Very nice! Enjoyed this beginning, look forward to more.
Cindy

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morrbran October 5 2007, 14:38:07 UTC
This is such a great start. I love how you have background on everyone's life. It was such an emotional chapter and so sad about Debbie, but its good that everybody had somebody to support them. I'm really glad you have Brian and Justin still in the loving relationship we saw at the end of the show. I'm looking forward to the next part.

Brandi

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qafmaniac October 5 2007, 16:01:58 UTC
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
WHAT AN AMAZING FIRST EPISODE!!!!
And I really can't wait to read more!

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