Return to Liberty Avenue - Episode One

Oct 04, 2007 21:40

 I'm a little early but I'm sure you'll forgive me for that ;)

Without any further ado, I bring you Episode One of Return to Liberty Avenue.

Enjoy and I can't wait to read your reviews...

So... as the song goes...

Pittsburgh, PA

Michael’s POV

The thing you have to understand is this; not everyone can just end a part of their life one day and start a new ( Read more... )

episode one

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lady_erzulie October 5 2007, 16:34:27 UTC
whoa. i so loved this episode. it was so beautiful. angsty and just, perfect. i love how mikey introduced the episode, just like queer as folk.

it's like, such.. not even deja vu, it's very sad that in one instance brian found out he had cancer when vic died and now he finds out he's in remission when debbie's hurt. that's got to be hard on him.

i love that brian's let justin help him through this bout of cancer. it shows their growth and just how far they've come.

i felt so heartbroken at the end. it's like, debbie. she's their mother and their strenght and they all come to her. it's going to be strange to see if they all drift away, or if they all come back together.

xx
dominique

p.s. if you still want me to be your beta, comment or email me at: incartoonmotion@yahoo.com

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girloftheburbs October 7 2007, 09:14:50 UTC
Oh my, so heartrenching and beautiful. Wonderful job, hon. I'll be sure to return for episode two.

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galesweetie October 8 2007, 22:51:25 UTC
Wow! Seems to be the consensus here!

That was one hellva chapter. Damn it left me speechless!
Heartbreaking,intense and ansty.........Wow!
Love it!
Can't wait for the next chapter!

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mistress_tien October 19 2007, 11:21:51 UTC
Great ep!

You've got great voices and timing. And, I'm *so* happy that Drew and Emmett are together! I can't wait for more.

Thanks for sharing!

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iamastarin2006 August 7 2008, 06:00:47 UTC
I just found this but since it's almost a year you wrote this I guess you are not going to cont....not sure if you even are around can you tell if maybe your posting somewhere else.... it was beyond wonderful.....kaylin

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