Wee! Read My Crappy Thing!

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Here's something I just finished.. Of course I don't like it but comment and tell me what you think:

Trapped in a place that nobody sees

Trapped in a world of reality

All your hopes, dreams, and fears

They all come true and collide here

Cornered in the open nude as those first breaths

Ignored as everyone watches

Consider temptation when you know

Comments

[no_shelter_ratm]

THAT POEM KICKS ASS! AND YES WHILE I AM COMMENTING ON ALL OF YOUR JOURNAL ENTRIES I AM GOING TO DO IT IN CAPS! WHY?!?!?! CAUSE I FEEL LIKE IT BIOTCH!

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haha thanks jackie.. too much free time? :P

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thanks! aww i miss my michelle!! :P