Serenity in Untouched Splendor

Apr 03, 2005 22:26

Iliandra
_______________________________Beckon me, broken beams of bliss ( Read more... )

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beyondtoday April 4 2005, 14:26:46 UTC
AAAAAWwwwwww...
That was beautiful sweetheart.
As I have always promised,I turn you towards the Lord.
I hope, no matter how much you love me,that your greatest duty is to serve the Lord your God, and that He alone can bless with such authority.

... loons hehe. I am sooo glad that loons dont live around here! Though they would be a nice excuse to curl up in your arms. :)

I love you dearest Mushina~! Thank YOU for your thoughts, prayers, and time. Many many Many of which come at just the needed time. God has truly blessed us both~!

That was beautiful
my hopeless romantic... I love you!

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lifeismyconcert April 4 2005, 19:09:16 UTC
Interesting rhymes.
I also noted the alliteration in the fifth line and the leitmotif of light versus darkness.
Cause I'm... like that.
Overall, though, good job, bro.
She's a lucky chick.

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die_forgotten April 16 2005, 04:43:17 UTC
how bout this lyric... "love is justa hoax so forget anything that you have heard and live for the moment."

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