Poo...after writing this I realized how much it sounds like e.e. cummings. Forgive me.

[purple_corduroy]

"N GHT OF M SS NG L TT RS

Comments

[anathelen]

That's very clever! I like the simple fact that you pointed out missing letters in signs - a part of our modern lives I've never heard someone comment on in a poem. I really liked your description of the blown-up trash bag as "an American beauty jellyfish of the air", and I totally forget what that literary technique is called.

[purple_corduroy]

I think it might be "animality," which is kind of like personification, except that it gives animal characteristics to an inanimate object. Or I could be wrong. Who knows...I'm sleepy.

[misfitred]

This is probably my favorite of anything of yours that I've read.