So.. I'm new at this! Kinda!

Anyway, if you have anything to say about how I play Neku, or how I write in general, or anything at all really, be it criticism or comments or whatever, I would love to have it! Especially good criticism, actually. So yeah! IP is off, Anon should be on, and Screening is up.

It's time to get out of here.

[While the communicators, when operating independently, are perfectly capable cameramen, Neku isn't.]

The result being Wonderland is first treated to a shot of the sky, crisscrossed by the beams of the mansion's foyer. Quickly the view is swung down to confirm this, before pointing to Neku holding it at arm's length like ( Read more... )

[backdated  because I'm such a loser]

[The camera turns on of its own free will, revealing Neku's room, which hasn't changed much save a few posters. Neku himself is seen staring at colored egg - artifact of the second time he had journeyed out of his room since the previous event.]

So...

I don't know what's worse. The angry ones like that crazy ( Read more... )

((ooc; Meriken is blue, Neku is purple. Continued in the comments.))

[We begin with an accidental camera watching neku. He's leaving his room, lurking away to find something to eat and trying to avoid.. everyone. But rounding the corner, instead of everyone.. he finds a pair of jellyfish. He stares for a moment and begins to panic]

Jellies..? Augh! ( Read more... )

[The view opens with Neku examining the communicator with a thoughtful expression; behind him is the plain wall of a just-occupied room. He notices the record light is on, pushes one headphone back and starts talking to nobody in particular]

No noise, no missions..

[He glances at his hand to make sure there isn't the timer.]

No partners.. [No ( Read more... )

[The communicator turns on, revealing an unconscious Neku sprawled across a mansion hallway.]

[He stirs slightly. A hand flails outward and plants itself into the carpet. He forces himself up and stares at it with shock, then disgust.]

Ugh.. what the..

No..

Nononono.
Not.. Again.

Joshua!

Not! Again! I swear to.. You!!
[He sputters for a bit, then catches ( Read more... )

It was funny how those three weeks seem to change everything. Life was just.. different. In a good way. Shibuya hadn't changed, not from the ever-changing beast it always was, but somehow the sounds of the streets were less piercing. Neku still had his headphones - he wasn't himself without them - but they were half off now. Instead, he ( Read more... )