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[pyracies]

TITLE: 11 Years Later
PAIRING: Jack/Elizabeth, Will/Elizabeth (implied)
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: Part seven. I've tried something, ah, shall I say, different with this chapter. Whether or not it works, I suppose is up to you lot. And, that's all I'll say about that. Hopefully sufficient interest is peaked. :] &! I stilllll need a suitable title

Comments

[anonymous]

Curse you for being such an amazing writer! lol. I started the first sentence of your first chapter, fully intending to go to sleep after I finished it, and where am I an hour in a half later? Here, finding myself awake, fully addicted, and on Chapter 7, lol.

I absolutely ADORE your writing style, and you are honestly my favorite fan-fic writer of all time.

As for this chapter.. WOW! I liked the change-up with the letter writing, and the perfect blend of seriousness (is that a word? lol) and humour. (I'll eat my hat, lol) And can you say; cliff-hanger ending? Wouldn't that be a surprise to Will if mini-Jack grows up to be the spitting-image of his elder namesake? Haha, I can see his face now. Anyway, thank you so much for writing this and PLEASE post Chapter 8 soon. (Sorry it was so long, told you I was awake. lol)

[pyracies]

Wow, this has got to be the most flattering comment I've ever gotten. So sorry to keep you awake, and such! If it helps, I posted this at around 5am, so I got very little sleep, also.

[captjackspeanut]

I have just finished reading from the beginning!! All I can say is that I am speechless...partly anyways! That last sentence..."he has your eyes" just about broke my heart! Is it alright to add you to friends list? I just love your writing! Waiting impatiently for the next part!lol. :)

[pyracies]

So glad you dug it, I wasn't really sure if that was too much, but I wanted to do it so badly. Thank you!

[pyracies]

PS: &! of course I don't mind, I've added you back. :]

[freelke]

I have to know what happens next. Please put up chapter 8 very soon. And that cliffhanger!! I'm dying to know what happens. Please update soon

[pyracies]

I'll try. All depends on when my Jack muse comes around next.

Thanks for reading!

[evilkath]

I loved every single sentence. It was perfect and beautiful, though very sad.

[pyracies]

Yes, our darlings are quite sad.

Thank you!

[versifico]

Wonderful! I love the letters...the last ones, from Elizabeth, were heartbreaking. Looking forward to more from you :)

(Am friending you so that I will not miss this again...)

[pyracies]

Have friend you back, and thanks!