Pools Of Hope and Ash

[pyragus]

Morning comes to fast and soon and without the light that should couple it. My alarm sounds the warning at 5:30 and my mind throws bricks at my eyes until they open. Darkness is the color of the dawn and hard breathing fills my awareness. Someone is here with me. I squeeze my eyes shut trying to remember. Remember where and who I am. I am Karlie,

Comments

[caloused]

Abso-bally-lutely beautiful.
I love the word choice and flow of everything, I can see, feel and love everything in this story. It's beautiful and wonderful.

[pyragus]

well i am glad you actually enjoy reading me then, and dont just find it a chore you must perform since you are my friend. lol, I liked this dream too, but i kept it in my mind for a couple days before i wrote it because i didnt know a tasteful way to say that i imagined running arround on a burnt hill buck naked and not caring. lol, well i think it came out tasteful enough. I miss you Addie, and i am tired from staying up to late with you last night. I wish you were here.

Love you Calloused Addie

~kar