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Oct 24, 2005 14:58

The two black men approached him. He had done something they didn't like. They surrounded him. One of them held him by the coat, while the other threaten him with what they might do. You could see the fear in his eyes, the terror. He had only carelessly been in the wrong place at the wrong time. His life was flashing before his eyes. He knew ( Read more... )

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dear_book October 24 2005, 20:45:18 UTC
plot twist!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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liketheowlbirds October 24 2005, 22:04:57 UTC
did it start off with you as part of an audience watching yourself in a story but then (Before he could even realize how foolish he had been, they were upon him. ... And as they came up to me, I knew that this time they would kill me.) end up with you as only a character in the story and not in the audience.

im going to start writing my dreams. ive been meaning to for a while now.

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pyratesarrrcool October 24 2005, 22:57:23 UTC
when i'm writing in third person, i was apart of the audience and the main character was not me (as in Barrett). then when i switch to first person, it is me (but none of the deeds the other guy did were the deeds of Barrett (the guilt didn't carry over), but i was in his position. and from the view of the antagonist, the protagonist was the same person the whole time).

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pyratesarrrcool October 24 2005, 23:14:54 UTC
Dear Anders,

Bronze 106 Where No One Has Gone Before

Bronze 110 The Battle

Silver 114 Datalore

Bronze 116 11001001

Bronze 117 Home Soil

Bronze 119 Coming of Age

Silver 120 Heart of Glory

GOLD* 122 Skin of Evil

Bronze 124 We’ll Always Have Paris

Silver 125 Conspiracy

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pyratesarrrcool October 24 2005, 23:16:02 UTC
Then after however many of those you might view, watch 103 The Naked Now. It is very odd, but hilarious.

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karenismysister October 25 2005, 19:03:02 UTC
k, did that dream scare the stache off your face or what?

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pyratesarrrcool October 25 2005, 22:51:49 UTC
instead of waking up, it felt more like changing realities. i was transported from where-ever that was to my bed. it was terrifying.

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