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[pyrimidine]

At Home in The Sea, part 2

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[figletofvenice]

okay, dude, this is fucking perfect. how are you the way that you are? the changes in this final draft are just - you've solved everything, you are wonderful, I'm just going to put that out there. because it is true. HOW DO YOU DO IT. sometimes it's all I can do not to just stare at a draft and hope that everything magically fixes itself!

so, yes. you are not nearly as difficult as you think you are re: emails, and betaing this was pretty rad. not a hardship at all.

[pyrimidine]

Oh god dude, I just didn't think I was making any progress for all the time I was spending on it, so I was just like, OKAY MOVE THIS, ADD THIS, MOVE THIS, POST IT NOOOOW. You were so much help, lemme know if I can ever return the favor :D

[mrsdstephens]

Wow, just wow. I don't even really feel like I can string words together sufficiently to praise what you have written here. It is like we are speaking different languages. Except we aren't. I guess what I am saying is that I am speechless.

[pyrimidine]

ahhhhh thank you so much!! This was my first time writing anything over 10k, so I'm really happy that you liked it :D

[eleveninches]

This is so beautiful.

[pyrimidine]

:D Thanks, man!

[jibrailis]

Em, you are like Frankenstein's monster, except by monster, I would have you replace that word with 'magician.' But what I mean is, your writing is so varied and on-point. Most people have one or two strengths, but it's like you're put together by a patchwork quilt of all of them. You are amazing at the technical details of the heist, your descriptions of places and atmosphere is spot on, you can do action, your characterization is second to none, your choice of words exquisite, you can do romance -- I have to confess that I am fully jealous, but also so, so glad to have you. You and this beautiful saga you've written, canon fic of my heart, Arthur and Eames pulled together slowly and inevitably. A quiet love story, the kind that can shift the angle of the way light catches on someone's hair, and change worlds.

[pyrimidine]

:x :x :x You are faaaaaar, far too lovely, man. I know this sounds cheesy and weird, but this story was kind of on the backburner until we talked about trying to combine ~feelings~ with action and stuff. I'm so glad you're in this fandom, have I said that before ;__;

[mirareeves]

This is fantastic. They're both completely oblivious and totally in-tune with each other, it's kind of amazing.

[pyrimidine]

Thanks so much!! I do love the in-tune-but-oblivious angle with these two :D