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[pyrimidine]

At Home in The Sea, part 2

Comments

[makesomelove]

UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[pyrimidine]

YOU ARE THE COMMENTER IN THE WORLD

[vicious_seagull]

This is so beyond flailing. I'm just, like, soaking in quiet, intense appreciation of how excellent and well-woven this story is. I want to fold it up in a walnut shell and treasure it forever and that doesn't even make any sense.

I'm sort of blissed out on how good this is, thank you so much.

[pyrimidine]

Oh man, thank you so much!! I had some trouble with this story, so it is super gratifying to hear this. :)

[tikiaceae]

Just lovely. I love this Arthur and Eames so much. They're just MEANT TO BE. <33333

I think I'm going to bask in this loveliness for a while. \o/

[pyrimidine]

THEY MAY NOT KNOW IT, BUT THEY'RE MEANT TO BE, YES

Thanks!! ♥

[pyrimidine]

:D :D Thank you so much!! This is the first 'long' story I've written, so I was like, akljiohs;ldhiwe;hoklfw. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[elouette]

This is...beyond amazing. I could tell you how many points I connected with, from Arthur's sensation of claustrophobia to the fiery sensation of drunken anger in Eames, but that would just be rambling. This was so real, it was like watching a film. Beautiful <3

[pyrimidine]

Ahhhh thanks so much! I was hoping all those emotions came through okay -- it's hard to know how obvious it would be to a reader. I'm really happy you liked it :D