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Entry #14 - "The Gravitational Effects of Rotation"

Apr 18, 2006 16:53

Title: The Gravitational Effects of Rotation
Written By: msjudi
Timeline:Post Season Five
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Genre:

( The Gravitational Effects of Rotation )

Comments 82

dreambee3 April 23 2006, 13:06:33 UTC

This was wonderful, I thoroughly enjoyed it - a lot of thought and effort went into creating this great story.

If I had to pick out one great line, it would be this: "Lust, Sunshine, unadulterated, unbridled, youthful lust. I figure that to deprive the world of hearing you whimper out my name on every breath would be monumentally unfair."

Their tour of the world was so entertaining - especially Justin's giggling in Chicago, Brian's pride in Justin's appreciation of history in San Francisco, the “disappointment” of Paris, and Brian considering suing the state of Colorado for the havoc caused on thair ardour by the thin air of Denver . Their breakup was difficult, but it lead them to making the final commitment, and it was perfect that it happened in Pittsburg.

“Finally, ultimately, it was about who they love, and why - and how that still makes them feel like they want more. Always more.”

Thankyou - wonderful writing, it grabbed me immediately, it flowed so well. ♥

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:37:31 UTC

Thank you so much, sweetie, you always leave such great feedback and it makes me proud to have been the author of this story. *hug*

dreambee3 May 1 2006, 22:06:08 UTC

...it makes me proud to have been the author of this story

And so you should be, Judi, it was wonderful. As I said, there was so much thought that went into this, and now that I know you're the author, I'm not surprised. It's funny how after the unveiling, one can say "oh yes, of course" !

And I love the title too - it "pulls" you in. ♥

paddies April 23 2006, 17:09:42 UTC

I love this a lot.

Brilliant. ♥

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:37:42 UTC

Thanks sweetie :)

paddies May 8 2006, 19:26:15 UTC

I can't remember if I already asked you if I can archive it on QE...*is retarded*

Anyway... can I archive it? :-)

msjudi May 8 2006, 21:32:18 UTC

hehehe no you didn't, but yes you can ;)

goddesstar April 23 2006, 22:21:21 UTC

Loved it.

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:37:51 UTC

Thank you :)

lunachickk April 24 2006, 00:32:09 UTC

Wow, this is one of my favorites so far. Powerful & beautiful. I love the ending.

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:38:03 UTC

Thank you :)

claramarie12 April 24 2006, 03:09:07 UTC

Too cool-- I love the world traveling-- mixing two of my favorite things-- travel and these hot men! Great job.

msjudi May 1 2006, 17:38:16 UTC

hehehe thanks :)