This one was so *real*! I didn't have any problems imagining this path for them - you kept it so true to the characters (difficult when you're aging them and accounting for maturity). Of course B&J would define the passage of their time together in trysts. ;-)
"Lust, Sunshine, unadulterated, unbridled, youthful lust. I figure that to deprive the world of hearing you whimper out my name on every breath would be monumentally unfair."
Loved that comment. Love the idea that they're out there somewhere fucking their way around the world...and that they finally decide to make their love about the two of them only.
Thank you so much. I tried really hard to intrepret the prompt we were given, not totally understanding what it meant, myself, but it resulted in a fic I totally enjoyed writing, so I'm very glad you enjoyed reading it! :)
It seems I've picked out just the great ones. I'm so proud of myself. I'm sorry you didn't win, but I need to tell you or better, repeat myself again: your story is amazing.
Honestly, I never expected to win once I read some of the really amazing fics that were posted, but it was a lot of fun to participate in this contest! :)
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I'm glad you enjoyed this one :) *hug*
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"Lust, Sunshine, unadulterated, unbridled, youthful lust. I figure that to deprive the world of hearing you whimper out my name on every breath would be monumentally unfair."
Loved that comment. Love the idea that they're out there somewhere fucking their way around the world...and that they finally decide to make their love about the two of them only.
Brilliant.
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Absolutely perfect!!!
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