Entry #09 - "Exponential"

[severina2001]

Title: Exponential
Written By: moose74
Timeline: Post Season Five
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Genre: Romance, Fluff

Comments

[damietta]

Ah, sweet.

I will never look at a postcard of "the big green lady" again without thinking of Brian and Justin.

Deb

[moose74]

Aww, thanks for reading! :D

[asm614]

Okay, I confess...

“I’m coming! Keep your pants on!” The door swings open and I’m facing blond hairs sticking up three different way, two days growth and sweat pants that should be burned, “Look, I told you I’d pay….Brian? Brian!”

“You’re going to pay me to keep my pants on?”

I SO laughed out loud. The conversations between characters seemed so in-character, and so natural. I loved the Lindsay/Brian exchange, and the B/J banter.

And I too will always think of them when I see the big green lady ;-)

[moose74]

Glad I could make you laugh!

The conversations between characters seemed so in-character, and so natural. Thank you! That is lovely feed back to receive. :D

Thanks for reading!

[shadownyc]

It's about time Lindsay gave good advice. This was refreshing.

[ranksy]

LOL! My thoughts exactly!

[moose74]

*kicks Cowlip*

Thanks for reading! :)

[moose74]

If only she was like this in canon...

Thanks for reading!! :D

[gaeln]

You've done snarky Brian very well and I really like fic that has him doing mundane stuff like getting the dinosaur out of the box, and having trouble doing it. I also like how you tied Brian and Justin into Rage and JT at the end, nicely done.

[moose74]

Those toys are pretty darn tricky to open these days! Fort Knox is easier to get into. ;P

Thanks for reading and the nice feedback! :)

[happier_bunny]

Nice...glad Lindsay made an appearance and reverted back to giving good advice. ;)

[moose74]

Thanks! :D