Entry #08 - "Eternal Youth"

[severina2001]

Title: Eternal Youth
Written By: dalic07
Timeline: Post Ep-513
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Justin/Ethan
Genre: Romance

Comments

[agneson9]

Wow.

I picked out a couple of spelling errors here and there but this story is definitely rated as a top 3 out of the 7 stories i've finshed reading (so far).

[dalic07]

yea my spelling errors were bad, but I thought it didn't take away from the story too much. thanks

[jule1122]

For some reason I kept waiting for something bad to happen. I'm glad it didn't. Every now and then Brian needs to be ridiculously romantic!

[dalic07]

I was trying to keep you guessing and give you a sense of dread but give you a sweet release at the end.

[loud99]

I like the premise of the story, but I had a difficult time reading it because of the frequent changes in point of view. I wasn't sure who's 'voice' I was reading half the time.

[dalic07]

haha yea about the povs they were in two colors when I sent the story and it didn't show so I understand. Next time I'll label it better.

[shadownyc]

This was a lovely fic. It's nice to see B/J in some good, romantic schmoop fic. I'm not sure where the warning fit in.

[dalic07]

i didn't put the j/e warning on there, so when I saw it i was like WTF. I didn't think it was necessary

[happier_bunny]

Why the J/E warning?

I had a hard time following the pov switches but schmoop is a always nice!

[dalic07]

the j/e warning was something I didn't put on there so I'm not sure why its there.

The povs were in color in the email I sent, which made it a little easier to read, but it was changed when it got posted. Sorry for the confusion