Entry #08 - "Eternal Youth"

[severina2001]

Title: Eternal Youth
Written By: dalic07
Timeline: Post Ep-513
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Justin/Ethan
Genre: Romance

Comments

[journalkitten]

Wow - Brian does ridiculously romantic so well ;-)

Got a bit confused at times, switching pov and some parts made me consciously suspend my disbelief (Justin not guessing what was up), but the characters were so real despite that. It was the wonderfully happy ending I wish we could have seen on air.

[dalic07]

hehe, I love Brian when he's this romantic so I wanted others to enjoy it as much as I do.

lol everyone has said something about the pov so I'm definately going to work on that. There were something that I wanted to keep the reader in the dark about (hence why Justin was a little slow about things). Glad you enjoyed it though.

[anno53]

It's so nice to read a 'ridiculously romantic' story like this. Justin and Brian have been through so much. It's nice that they finally get their moment, their time, their eternal commitment. Thanks for writing it!