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Entry #04 - "Born To Love You"

Apr 18, 2006 17:35

Story Title: Born To Love You
Written By: severina2001
Timeline: Post Season Five
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Genre: Romance, Humour

( Born To Love You )

Comments 105

damietta April 18 2006, 23:58:21 UTC

Then this is a nice lesson for you in learning that you can’t always get what you want.” Justin could hear Brian breathing, and prepared himself for a queen-out of truly Kinney-esque proportions. Then-- “I got you,”.

What a great, great paragraph.

I liked that Brian, as he would in canon, let Justin figure out things for himself. I really liked the subtle description of Brian's shoulders when Justin showed up.

Justin telling Brian he didn't understand whey he (Justin) was in New York being something he didn't want to be because everyone else thought he should was perfect.

As was the line about the couch. LOL!

Deb

severina2001 May 2 2006, 00:58:40 UTC

Thanks so much for your thoughful comment!

I really wanted to address that Justin had never expressed any interest in painting or being rich and famous prior to Season Five, and while it's perfectly logical for him to be swept up in the moment of the experience, he would ultimately realize that the struggle was not worth the payoff when the payoff wasn't even something he particularly wanted.

Thanks so much for reading. :)

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severina2001 May 2 2006, 00:59:06 UTC

Thank you. :)

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severina2001 May 2 2006, 01:51:03 UTC

You should have guessed!

We should have had a prize for the most correct guesses. Damn. Maybe next time.

asm614 April 19 2006, 02:49:55 UTC

What she ^ said.

Those lines made me die a little. In a good way.

Lovely.

severina2001 May 2 2006, 00:59:28 UTC

Awww. Thanks. :)

zosha2003 April 19 2006, 03:57:01 UTC

“I remember the way you smiled at me.” Open, warm, vibrant. Free. “I remember that.”

“It’s when I fell in love with you,” Brian’s voice was raspy and raw.

Justin smiled. “I remember that, too.”

this stopped me cold - and made me love this story so much more

severina2001 May 2 2006, 01:00:04 UTC

Thank so much. I soooo want Justin to remember that dance.

kjsilopanna April 19 2006, 04:14:54 UTC

EXCELLENT. And, I have a sneaking suspicion as to the identity of the author...should I go ahead and guess?

"I got you." Perfection.

severina2001 May 2 2006, 01:00:49 UTC

Thanks so much for reading.

And... were you right?

kjsilopanna May 2 2006, 02:27:38 UTC

I actually was! Woot! You just rock that much, I guess. =)