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Entry #04 - "Born To Love You"

Apr 18, 2006 17:35

Story Title: Born To Love You
Written By: severina2001
Timeline: Post Season Five
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Genre: Romance, Humour

( Born To Love You )

Comments 105

happier_bunny April 20 2006, 17:32:18 UTC

Awww schmoopy fun and I really like that you brought back the graphic design dream of Justin's. I like that, it was a twist ya don't often see. :D

severina2001 May 2 2006, 01:15:05 UTC

Long live the Schmoop!

I'm still not reading much fanfic and I've been kind of surprised to hear that brining up Justin's graphic design/animation dreams is considered a twist in this story. Thanks so much for you lovely comments.

heretic_x April 20 2006, 19:04:31 UTC

Every word held my attention. This was a perfect ending, an ending that gave the well-deserved homage to the Brian and Justin relationship. I loved Justin's epiphany at the end- what a wonderful, unique twist and so believable. Also, your characterizations of Brian and Justin were picture-perfect.

severina2001 May 2 2006, 01:16:43 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm truly surprised that nobody seems to have written a 'Justin really doesn't want NYC after all' type story. I'm repeating myself from earlier replies here:

I really wanted to address that Justin had never expressed any interest in painting or being rich and famous prior to Season Five, and while it's perfectly logical for him to be swept up in the moment of the experience, he would ultimately realize that the struggle was not worth the payoff when the payoff wasn't even something he particularly wanted.

Thanks so much for reading. :)

netlagd April 20 2006, 21:26:28 UTC

“It’s when I fell in love with you,” Brian’s voice was raspy and raw.

Justin smiled. “I remember that, too.”

You know when the line is perfect, when everyone else tells you.

Not that it hasn't been said before, but my heart did a tumble when I read those two sentences.

*sigh!*

faramir_boromir April 22 2006, 15:28:10 UTC

*points up to comment*

What she said. Exactly.

severina2001 May 2 2006, 01:17:37 UTC

Hee. Thanks!

severina2001 May 2 2006, 01:17:13 UTC

Awww,thank you!

seamonkeyz27 April 20 2006, 22:33:19 UTC

Lovely.... my favorite line "I got you"...mmmm

severina2001 May 2 2006, 01:17:59 UTC

Thanks for reading!

lunachickk April 21 2006, 00:55:53 UTC

Really, really nice! That ballroom scene was great!

severina2001 May 2 2006, 01:18:23 UTC

Thank you. :)