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Entry #33 - "What Did You Just Say?"

Apr 18, 2006 15:56

Title: What Did You Just Say?
Written By: vamphile
Timeline: Ep-511 to 513
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Genre: pov gapfiller

( What Did You Just Say? )

Comments 31

gaeln April 23 2006, 23:04:47 UTC

I tend to like gapfillers and this one works for me, both of their voices seem authentic.

'And I want this to last. But I’m not gonna. Not if he keeps doing that thing where he looks at me' is definitely my favorite line.

heretic_x April 25 2006, 03:25:27 UTC

LOL about the sales pitching, so true with Brian.
So many clever lines... "Words are bullshit. Sorry's bullshit. You told me that. You also stared it so hard into my brain on the steps of Woody's after Stockwell lost that I was surprised it wasn't tattooed on my forehead in the morning."

After reading your gap-filler, I would've been happy with this as the finale-love the way you captured their emotions in your words.

paddies April 27 2006, 13:21:23 UTC

Awwww...even tho I strongly dislike S5 I have to say that I really liked this gapfiller. Both Brian and Justin's voices are great and the dialog is perfect. :x:x:x

harka April 27 2006, 16:33:23 UTC

I'm speechless. I love you!

journalkitten April 30 2006, 13:22:14 UTC

This reward of this fic was spectacular ;-) Almost wish the show could have ended there, too.

Wonderful voices. Love the little things that show how much in love they are even if they were tripping up on the actual words. Love that Justin works his anger out in black paint and that Brian knows him enough to be worried once he sees how much Justin's used. Priceless.