Comments | qaf_anon: Entry #33 - "What Did You Just Say?"

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Entry #33 - "What Did You Just Say?"

Apr 18, 2006 15:56

Title: What Did You Just Say?
Written By: vamphile
Timeline: Ep-511 to 513
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Genre: pov gapfiller

( What Did You Just Say? )

Comments 31

_alicesprings April 21 2006, 12:47:33 UTC

Very, very nice. And I'd put money on this being by vamphile

kathiejmie April 21 2006, 18:52:05 UTC

Beautiful! A wonderful gapfiller! I hope this community won't be deleted because I'm adding this story to memories.

dreambee3 April 22 2006, 12:09:48 UTC

I loved this gapfiller, and felt very spoilt that the pov changed so often, filling in all the tiniest feelings and details behind the screen moments. Voices were perfectly Brian and Justin.

There was a great feeling of romance throughout, from the gesture of Brian signing the papers, to his surprise visit to the studio and convincing Justin to choose a ride to West Virginia rather than wait for his pizza! and then the nervous moments at the house leading up to his successful sales pitch. I loved this: “Ask, ask, ask…. If I can tell him I love him with a stare, can I make him ask what he needs to know… finally he asks.”

And I loved Justin’s: “…He took a big fucking risk. And if I said no…who’s the asshole then? I’ll let him be the asshole in this relationship. I say yes.

Great work, you covered so much, beautifully. ♥

Wonderful gapfiller! reader1 April 22 2006, 17:18:06 UTC

I'm a sucker for gapfillers, and this one had a spectacular Justin voice. Although everyone thinks that getting the Brian voice down is so difficult, I find that many don't work quite so hard on Justin, and he is a really difficult one to find, perhaps because he had so MANY DIFFERENT ONES IN CANON! LOL! But this one is just perfect, and is reminiscent of the snarky, but matured voice from season one which is one he should have never lost.

You took me into the minds of Brian and Justin in a part of canon that I never really believed, and you made me believe it. I didn't think that could be done, but you did it. Congrats to whoever the author is. I applaud you.

Thanks for submitting this excellent fic. Sherrie

seamonkeyz27 April 23 2006, 22:17:47 UTC

fantastic... I love their thoughts before and during their trip to Britin... fantastic