Seasons Challenge # 5: And If I’d Ever Leave You …

Mar 13, 2011 11:59

Title: And If I’d Ever Leave You …
Written by: wren_kt7oz 
Timeline: Post S5 - about 2 years down the track; it takes place at Britin
Author’s Notes: This is a kind of song fic, for which I humbly apologise. I don’t write them very often (in fact, the only others I’ve ever written were directly for a song fic challenge), but the theme of this challenge and ( Read more... )

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kmboatright March 13 2011, 21:38:26 UTC
That's so sweet and schmoopy. I love it.

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wren_kt7oz March 19 2011, 07:08:02 UTC
Thank you - glad you enjoyed it. It wasn't exactly what I'd envisaged writing when I signed up for the challenge, but I kind of had fun with it. *g*

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bksbracelet March 13 2011, 23:48:27 UTC
Wonderful I just loved the constant commentary Brian was having with himself. He still snarked and moaned but instead of stalking off to get his needs met he let that strange glow inside remind him he was loved. Brian will struggle his whole life with accepting he is loved because of the damage inflicted by the Kinneys but every day he fights the fear and let's a little bit of happiness seep in. Beautifully written thank you xo

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wren_kt7oz March 19 2011, 07:10:17 UTC
Thanks, Chris.

Brian will struggle his whole life with accepting he is loved

Yes - envied, admired, lusted after even he can accept ... but loved ... it has been a challenge for him.

Glad you enjoyed my exploration of one of the ways that challenge might play out.

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frusciantechick March 14 2011, 01:50:29 UTC
Emotional and oh so romantic! Loved Brian's inner dialogue. So much love in this story that it had me smiling and feeling warm all over.

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wren_kt7oz March 19 2011, 07:13:11 UTC
Thank you. I think what I most disliked about the way S5 ended, was that we never got to see Brian just enjoy being in a loving relationship. (Or Justin either for that matter.) I try to write what I would have liked to have seen in canon. Glad you enjoyed this attempt.

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sexy_pumpkin March 14 2011, 03:12:01 UTC
Sigh!!!!

OMG so friggin romantic!!

It's stories like these that keep me coming back to LJ. They were amazing together,, & from your little story here it looks like they always will be.

Thanks for the smile on my face,,I just loved it,,later jx

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wren_kt7oz March 19 2011, 07:14:06 UTC
Thanks, J. Yes ... they were indeed amazing together. And in my head at least they most definitely always will be. Glad you enjoyed.

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rainbow1907 March 14 2011, 09:28:29 UTC
So sweet and full of love, but still Brian in all his wonderful snarkiness ♥ Beautifully written, lovely story - made me smile so much, many thanks! Rena :)

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wren_kt7oz March 19 2011, 07:15:20 UTC
Thank you. I've always enjoyed the snarky side of Brian and it's one thing about him that I can't imagine ever changing. Glad you enjoyed this example.

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