Comments | queen_qing: .8018. In the Name of the Father :: Part 1 of 2 [YAMAMOTO TAKESHI]

queen_qing

.8018. In the Name of the Father :: Part 1 of 2 [YAMAMOTO TAKESHI] - For Chelsey

Feb 16, 2009 17:25

Ave Maria, piena di grazia,
Santa Maria, Madre di Dio,
prega per noi peccatori,
adesso e nell'ora della nostra morte.
In nomine patris, et filii
et spiritus sancti

A m e n

( The day they came for Yamamoto Tsuyoshi, Yamamoto Takeshi was carrying out a mob hit in Rome, Italy. )

yamamoto/hibari, fic, for chelsey, katekyo hitman reborn

Comments 42

griefer February 16 2009, 09:33:36 UTC

oh baby *smashes face on fic* give me a minute to write up a coherent enough review for this jstilksd;LKGNDSlk

queen_qing February 16 2009, 09:35:15 UTC

YOU NEED TO REFRESH IT IDKKK I MADE CHANGES AND KAJDKAJDF *TEARS IT UP ANGRILY*

griefer February 16 2009, 09:38:23 UTC

LMFAO BABY *PICKS UP*

queen_qing February 16 2009, 09:44:54 UTC

jhsksajhadhf )))))): *CLINGS TO FACE*

griefer February 16 2009, 09:38:09 UTC

qingyyyyyyyyyyy *koala cling* this was beautiful bawwwww AND I KNOW IT'S NOT FINISHED YET but it could stand by itself just perfectly fine. i love how thoroughly you explored yamamoto's entire reaction to the news of his father's death and how it basically defines him as the person we see in the tyl arc. i love all the little details and the thing about him saying a little prayer after every person he's killed, because i could see him doing that. not because he necessarily believes in god, but because i can see him thinking that maybe it makes him just a little bit of a better person, that it kicks him up a level or two from what he's become.

ohhh it was just so painful, the raw emotion was perfect and so subtle but so there and i was so aware of it and my face was like ): the whole time i was reading it. i love it bb it's perfect *holds face*

queen_qing February 16 2009, 09:47:03 UTC

*HOLDS SO TIGHTLY* Thank you, thank you baby - your opinion really matters to me because you're like the only yamamoto player I seriously look up to and admire and you do know that I took all those quirks from your yama, right

right

jshasdasjhf and THANK YOU kajhdsksajhdf I WAS ACTUALLY ABOUT TO KILL THIS FIC DEAD because it deviated so far from what I wanted to write for you ):

8| YOU INSPIRE ME TOO MUCH.

lejlkwiet February 16 2009, 11:53:07 UTC

So sad :< I really like the parallels you drew between the two separate hits. *wibbles all over the fic* It's lovely.

queen_qing February 16 2009, 14:48:25 UTC

aksdahf eeeeeee thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! C:

lejlkwiet February 16 2009, 14:51:41 UTC

I loved it! It made me want to read more but at the same time it ended at a perfect spot sdaskj ;~;

queen_qing February 16 2009, 14:57:57 UTC

;____; *grabby hands at chelle*

cellardoorsky February 16 2009, 12:09:52 UTC

Stop. Saying. You. Cannot. Write. JEEZ.

/shall go back to weeping in a corner for Yama-kun. This is heartbreaking fic.

queen_qing February 16 2009, 14:49:03 UTC

ajshkdhf I was really kinda ajshdsadjhf WHEN I WROTE IT CAUSE IT WAS SO HORRIBLE YOU SHOULD HAVE SEEN IT. IT SUCKED.

NO FIFI DON'T CRY DON'T CRY ;A;

What do you want me to say? I need to see you to keysmash at you in RL theprerogative February 16 2009, 12:20:32 UTC

FUCK.

HOW CAN YOU KEYSMASH AT ME IRL?! queen_qing February 16 2009, 14:49:25 UTC

WELL I CAN HUG YOU UNTIL I BREAK YOUR SPINE theprerogative February 16 2009, 16:27:28 UTC

It's really good, how dare you want to burn it!