.8018. In the Name of the Father :: Part 1 of 2 [YAMAMOTO TAKESHI] - For Chelsey

Feb 16, 2009 17:25



Ave Maria, piena di grazia,
Santa Maria, Madre di Dio,
prega per noi peccatori,
adesso e nell'ora della nostra morte.
In nomine patris, et filii
et spiritus sancti

A m e n

The day they came for Yamamoto Tsuyoshi, Yamamoto Takeshi was carrying out a mob hit in Rome, Italy. )

yamamoto/hibari, fic, for chelsey, katekyo hitman reborn

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baseballidiot February 16 2009, 12:27:06 UTC
Ahaha. Considering what we went through on Saturday.

This is an insidious little thing. Creeping its way into your heart. XD

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queen_qing February 16 2009, 14:49:53 UTC
Yeees, it just stays there. And refuses to move. ALSO I MUST FRIEND YOU 8|

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WITH YOU DYING WILL? baseballidiot February 16 2009, 15:38:12 UTC
Okey! XD

Damn, you make me want to google.

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milodrums February 16 2009, 12:36:51 UTC
UWAAAH NICE!!

LOL my chinese stinks and I didn't understand those chinese words |D

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queen_qing February 16 2009, 14:51:35 UTC
eeeeeeee thank you!

OHHH IT'S OKAY- I SHOULD HAVE PROVIDED TRANSLATIONS - basically, it says "chu lai hun, chi zao yao huan". It means that when you're out there like the mafia killing people, sooner or later you'd be killed - or your friends or family would be :3

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milodrums February 17 2009, 09:36:23 UTC
OH YAY I CAN UNDERSTAND HANYU PINYIN HAHAH *FAIL*

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izkariote February 16 2009, 14:18:29 UTC
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So yeah.

WHERE IS THE REST?

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queen_qing February 16 2009, 14:51:54 UTC
INSIDE YOUR BUTT :3

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izkariote February 17 2009, 01:45:55 UTC
WHAT I ALREADY CHECKED THERE. WHAT DO YOU TAKE ME FOR.

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HEART thelovemafia February 16 2009, 14:19:54 UTC
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reading this fic makes me want to be Gokudera in this picture. Come let me hold you Takeshi and make everything all right. And I am NEVER like this. OH GOD I AM SO SORRY FOR ALL THE SAP.

BUT IT IS YOU!FIC AND IT MAKES ME BEAM SO HARD THAT IT IS CONNECTED TO THAT SONG and awesome awesome awesome. I love every single story that is about Yamamoto Tsuyoshi because I adore that man, and reading this fic makes me hurt so badly for Yamamoto and this is NOT. NORMAL. AT ALL. FOR ME.

Now you have made me want to hunt down your Byakuran/Gokudera so I can. Um. Read more Yamamoto!suffering. I have no idea what is wrong with me but please keep bringing on your fic. ♥

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HEARTS BACK FOREVER queen_qing February 16 2009, 14:54:41 UTC
ASASKJHF oh my god why is that art so beautiful?!?! jaakjdhashjakjshdf STOP MAKING ME WANT TO SHIP 8059, CHRIS! ;__; and no, don't apologize for the sap! It makes my inner self happy to see the sweet Chris being all sappy

AND jahsdkasjdjhf thank you so much and I'm so glad I made you smile and you thought it was good and AAAAAAAAAH SEE CHRIS?! THE UNIVERSE WANTS YOU TO LOVE YAMAMOTO 8|

IT WANTS YOU TO.

asdasjdkhasdf noakjhadjhf THE 10059 IS HERE AND I HOPE YOU DON'T BURN YOUR EYES OUT READING IT?! It means a lot to know that you like this fic, and so much, so much love for you, lovely girl ♥

You have no idea how much this comment made my day.

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evocates February 16 2009, 14:53:50 UTC
Mmmmmm yes. It's not angst here, not exactly. There's an emotional weight to it, a heaviness that's rather tragic, except not really. I love that you don't labour the point, and that you show Yamamoto's grief through his reactions. The prayer is a really good idea. ♥

When Tsuna leaves, Yamamoto doesn't look over. There is an apology in the hand that had been on his shoulder briefly, but there is no regret. They are both too old, too jaded for that. (They had taken that vow too young, when they were barely men and when they thought that somehow, they could have made a difference. When they lied themselves into believing that mercy can be found within the ranks of the mafia. That it is not a path carved from broken bodies and countless sacrifices.

That it is not a path of loneliness branded onto their backs. )

This is all for the family, and the only exit from the path that they had taken is through the bullet in their temple.

I absolutely adore this part. That is all. YES. REAL MAFIA. YES.

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queen_qing February 16 2009, 14:57:25 UTC
asjdahdf thank you - I was inspired by the Jay Chou song, and I thought to slip it in somehow, and thank you; it was exactly the feeling I'd wanted to convey!

HAHAHAHAHAH SAME HERE. THAT PART WAS WRITTEN LIKE, during one of my inspiration spurts. I swear, I have these spurts.

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evocates February 16 2009, 15:00:19 UTC
Ha! 8DDDD

... keep having those spurts, Qingbb. Keep having those spurts.

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queen_qing February 16 2009, 15:04:31 UTC
CAN'T

idk I get really into the writing when that happens? And my temper's very very short because it often doesn't come out how I want it to be. (I get very easily upset I don't know, because it felt like whatever I wrote is full of shit and not good enough and so messy.) And then I reread and write and rip and write again and at the end it feels so tiring.

=__=

this is why I don't write fics often. It's like nothing else matters when I start writing.

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