Unto thy soul with hoops of steel - Jared/Jensen NC-17 - 2/2

[queerly_it_is]

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[nearmiss76]

Awww, Jared is so sweet & shy, & I just want to pet him, & the sex is sooo hot, & they are just so adorable together & there was possessive Jensen being all growly, & his dirty, dirty mind.

But there's also the obvious love they have for each other (even if they're not saying it yet), & I love the image of Jensen sitting in his room creating amazing metal sculptures to hone his skills, & now there's the mystery of the voice Jared heard & who is watching them!

I can't tell you how much I love this verse! :)

[queerly_it_is]

Thank you! This the 'verse I write when I'm in the mood for schmoop haha, so the love and general sappiness is probably gonna shine through the whole thing.

I'm slowly adding plot and stirring in a bit of angst, so there'll more about the general world they're living in and who might be watching them in the next chapter! =D

[deanshot]

I can't believe you left it there but my god it was excellent.
I love Jensen's possessive inner thoughts to Jared's comment about a rich man.
I'm scared for them, someone out there knows about their gifts and we don't know who it is.
Hopefully the next part will tell us more.
Looking forward to that post.
Thanks for sharing.
*hugs*

[queerly_it_is]

Sorry lol! I originally had more planned but I wasn't sure how it would take so I thought I'd cut it off here and leave the suspense for the next part =P

Glad you're enjoying! ♥

[rockstarpeach]

Yikes! What will happen?!?!

Something about this story though, is I feel so bad for Jared, having to hear thoughts the way he does. I know he can shut most of them out after years of practice, but he's still got Jensen in there all the time. And I feel bad for Jensen, having Jared be able to hear his every thought.

Sometimes you just want some privacy, and those two will never get it. It's bound to put a strain on their relationship, at some point.

[queerly_it_is]

I'm so glad you picked up on it! It's one of the sadder aspects of their relationship; Jensen gets no privacy and Jared gets no peace, it's something that'll take more a forefront in the next chapter(s).

Thanks for reading! :D:D:D

[yellowbulma]

Love possessive Dean but hope the boy's aren't in danger ;A;

[queerly_it_is]

Thanks! =D

[usaexpat101]

that was fantastic...well written...you could feel their panic at the end...love the way that Jensen's parents accepted him and Jared...great job...so pleased that this is becoming a verse!

[queerly_it_is]

Thank you! So glad you're enjoying it =D