i dont really ship hongbin/sanghyuk but then i read the first couple paragraphs and oh god this line: every time the car makes a left turn, his thigh shifts away from the contact, comes back to a careful, deceptively casual equilibrium.it took my breath away, i had to keep reading - and you just kept going with this tentative gravitating feeling and i could not stop reading and your prose is just so! lovely! and gorgeous
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I'm so happy you gave this a try despite the pairing; I think so many of their moments tend to go overlooked, so I really wanted to bring them out in a canon setting. I'm really glad that you liked Taekwoon in this as well; he's such a character and so sweet, but so much of him tends to be overshadowed or overlooked when his on-camera shyness is taken at face value. Thank you for reading!
hello there, hyukbin *___* this fic...it's so great i can't stop smiling :((((( three paragraphs in and i was already in love~ the descriptions are emotional enough to pull at my gut and make me whisper furiously "i love it" to nobody in particular. the scenes were so taut with the atmospheric feeling (push pull of emotions and motions) and they felt well-developed! the characterizations of everyone were distinct and i loved them so much...cries.
i see lj user seulpeo has already beat me to the punch, but that line was really great!! along with and when they take their final bow, Sanghyuk reaches for Hongbin’s hand and finds it already halfway to his. and The bed dips at his hip, and a moment later Hongbin’s tumbling down on his other side. and but everything still feels soft, vague, and when he leans into Hongbin, moving with him, Hongbin looks a little startled. ! sorry this is ending up to be a list of quotes i like but i!!! love this writing and your style; this was a lovely piece, thank you for sharing <3
Thank you so much for this lovely comment! You're so kind; I don't know what to say but I can't stop smiling either :( I was really worried about the characterisation in particular so I'm glad everything worked for you ♡
You shouldn't be sorry, because I smiled at this picture for so long before remembering to finish reading your comment :( I'm definitely looking forward to writing more for them! Thank you :)
i love the pace of the fic, the interaction, not just between hongbin and hyuk, but all the other members as well. ah, and the silence between the two and the mutual understanding, i just, ugh, lovely. your writing is so, so nice, there are so many things in this worth quoting, i'm just at lost of words ;;
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i dont really ship hongbin/sanghyuk but then i read the first couple paragraphs and oh god this line:
every time the car makes a left turn, his thigh shifts away from the contact, comes back to a careful, deceptively casual equilibrium.it took my breath away, i had to keep reading - and you just kept going with this tentative gravitating feeling and i could not stop reading and your prose is just so! lovely! and gorgeous ( ... )
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i see lj user seulpeo has already beat me to the punch, but that line was really great!! along with and when they take their final bow, Sanghyuk reaches for Hongbin’s hand and finds it already halfway to his. and The bed dips at his hip, and a moment later Hongbin’s tumbling down on his other side. and but everything still feels soft, vague, and when he leans into Hongbin, moving with him, Hongbin looks a little startled. ! sorry this is ending up to be a list of quotes i like but i!!! love this writing and your style; this was a lovely piece, thank you for sharing <3
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NEW HYUKBIN
AND I READ THE BEGINNING
THIS SEEMS SO NICE
i'm so mad i don't have time to read rn
i'll be back with a longer comment u___u
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i love the pace of the fic, the interaction, not just between hongbin and hyuk, but all the other members as well. ah, and the silence between the two and the mutual understanding, i just, ugh, lovely. your writing is so, so nice, there are so many things in this worth quoting, i'm just at lost of words ;;
thank you for writing ;;
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