Comments | quillerfluffers: My First Fluff for the Quill (James/Lily)

br1gid in quillerfluffers

My First Fluff for the Quill (James/Lily)

Sep 10, 2006 23:51

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stmargarets September 11 2006, 15:33:10 UTC

Aw, you have so many good things happening in this story. James picking out leaves for her. Lily with a cold (I had a cold for Prom and I remember being quite bummed out about it) James falling and hurting himself. Poppy's waiting room. Accidental magic. *happy sigh* What a wonderful imagination you have ( ... )

br1gid September 11 2006, 21:20:49 UTC

The leaves in the headband was a self-insert here. :P I can see where it comes as more than a little difficult! I don't know if walking was the most precise word for their speed--meandering might be a bit better.

Thanks for all the compliments, I love sharing and though this was completely un-edited or rewritten, I was happy with it.

zia_montrose September 13 2006, 04:53:27 UTC

Real Life kidnapped me, but I finally got away ( ... )