Constructive Criticism Post for Aerith Gainsborough from Kingdom Hearts.
Post KH-II

Like her?  Hate her?  Think I should DIAF?  This is the place to tell me!

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Mun: Lunare
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Name: Aerith Gainsborough
Age: 24
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Wing Color: Misty Rose
( ☆Radiant MISC.☆ )

I haven't been to the park, yet.  Can anyone tell me what kind of rides are there?  Food?  Games? [There's an excited giggle.] And how are the lines?

Cloud!  Cloud!  You have to come to the amusement park with me!  [She's obviously very giddy about it because, fun, AMUSEMENT PARK!]  I don't want to go alone.

Being in someone else's body really makes you appreciates yours, huh?

[One Aerith Gainsborough is making her way through the village, her white arrival dress sticking to her uncomfortably, and looking rather put-out.  The journal she has is held tightly to her chest, though every now and then she'll peer down at it.   She seems to be looking for something, and will occasionally peep in someone's house window.]

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