I liked this better than the "real" scene because Andy seemed more true to her character (or at least her character of past seasons). She was a little too morose in the actual scene considering she was lucky enough to be in bed with sam. Great job!
Thanks! Still not over the weirdness of that whole thing...yes it was a crazy day but that should've affected him more than it affected her. He had to deal with his demons, not vice versa!
Although I am a fan of the scene as is (Sam telling her she is beautiful and brilliant? Yeah, she was stunned into being quiet) I think some part of the scene may have been edited out for time. It was awkward because they were in his truck and then they cut to his bedroom and he was playing two truths and a lie without any intro. One or two lines of her complaining he got out of playing the game would have been sufficient to make it less awkward...
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Although I am a fan of the scene as is (Sam telling her she is beautiful and brilliant? Yeah, she was stunned into being quiet) I think some part of the scene may have been edited out for time. It was awkward because they were in his truck and then they cut to his bedroom and he was playing two truths and a lie without any intro. One or two lines of her complaining he got out of playing the game would have been sufficient to make it less awkward...
which you did nicely here.
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The way you write both Sam and Andy is spot on!
I read somewhere that you have more fics, are they locked for friends?
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I've locked fics because I like to know who's reading, and most people don't leave feedback.
I'll give you access to the McSwarek ones :)
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