twisted knots - chapter 4

[raelee92]

It was a dreary and depressing Saturday morning, the sky outside Jinki’s bedroom window overshadowed with dark cumulonimbus clouds, threatening heavy rain. A stray lightning struck across the sky, momentarily illuminating the dark sky but disappearing as soon as it had come.

Jinki lay in his bed, currently experiencing a peculiar feeling of being

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[emptycavern]

Spot~~
Omg their meeting was so.... >< Sweet but sad? I really like their dynamics but it did seem slighhhhhhtly abrupt to me. Still, I'm loving this more and more! I can't wait to find out Kibum's story!

I'm sorry for this nonsense comment, tmr is putting a huge weight on my mind right now... Guess you know how it feels. While you've been craving for junk food, I've been in a temporarily permanent dreary mood which involves fixing my face in a scowl. Haha.
Best luck to you for tmr bb, I love you~ <3

[raelee92]

Yehhhh it was abrupt right? ): That's what i felt too...but if i dragged a bit longer then this chapter will be like ANOTHER teaser....Thanks for the comment anyway bb! Heh i was writing this in the middle of the night when i couldn't fall asleep after waking up from a ridiculous nightmare (which involved frankensteins and ghosts or something like that -.-). I actually had to pause quite a few times while writing their meeting scene because this stupid author was getting all overwhelmed by emotions herself....at 4am in the morning, no less XP

[emptycavern]

It's okay, it was just a tiny little bit abrupt or coincidental, but I know sometimes it just can't be helped...

Haha you know what, I was thinking exactly the same thing as you, sleep till 12pm and slowly go to school to get the dreaded cert since my school is like 10 minutes away from home lol.. I wouldn't have the mood too! In fact for the last three days I haven't been able to focus on anything properly. Lucky is completely unwritten oh god ==

Yeah, let's both pull through this together!
It's comforting to know I have you ^^

[raelee92]

Lol school is an hour away for me -.- I think i'll go crazy on the bus ride there, tbh. Heh and i just cancelled on my driving instructor! I doubt it's a good idea to be driving when i'm distracted anyway; don't want to cause an accident XD

Don't worry about lucky for the meantime; take your hiatus as a chance to just chill away from the pressure of having to write something up to standard.

Oh bb, you don't know how thankful i am for you too (: Remember, i'm always here for you no matter what! LJ message me if you want to (:

[ringdingdong19]

ayy you're tempting me to abandon my work and read this!! i still have a good 3 hours left in the office
cant wait for it to be over so i can read this!

[ringdingdong19]

screw work i need to read this.
fuuuuuuuck if not for the fact that i'm still in the office right now with my colleagues around me i would've screamed so loud and spazz and cry idk.
i love how their reuniting is not so overly dramatized, no 'fuck y did u leave me' etc etc they didnt say anything but fuck the feeling's all there.
Jinki turned around, and swore he could hear the rush of the blood in his ears before his eyes focused on the slim, petite figure at the far end of the hall, each hand holding the tiny hand of a child and with many more behind, following him

[raelee92]

Thanks for your comment dear! HAHAHAHA please don't abandon your work for this crazy piece of fiction from a deranged girl, but i'm flattered that i'm able to draw that kind of emotion out from you (:

Yep, i personally hate overly-dramatised meeting scenes, they're so over-rated and overused. Still, this is the kind of thing that can only come up while writing in the middle of the night hehe. And also, i had trouble finding the right words to articulate their emotions, so i just let their actions do the talking.

I'm glad you liked this dear! Thanks for reading and for your support!

[raelee92]

Aww thank you thank you! I know, his parents are good people, just a little over-protective. Their love has never changed anyway, but circumstances tore them apart. You'll see a lot of unfortunate circumstances in this story. Just saying :p

Thanks for reading and commenting as always! (:

[raelee92]

Aww bb you're so cute ahahaha *glomps you*

[sunday_lee]

finally they met after those years of separation. OnKey relationship is really precious <3
poor Kibum, life must be hard for him, permanently lamed leg, stuck in the orphanage, no wonder he felt like be thrown-away T_T but now he has Jinki right beside him and love him ^^
wait for the next chapter ^^
Thank you for your writing~

[raelee92]

Yeah i love the onkey dynamics too! That's how i always imagined our onkey to be; no need for words or any of those things, their actions and emotions speak louder than anything else (:

Thanks for reading and commenting! And you're most welcome, my greatest joy is to spread the onkey love with all of you ninjas out there! (:

[hyngurl_24]

Thank you for updating!!! I squee-d!!!

This is so sweet, I love how even though so much time has passed that they just fall into this universe all of their own. Sadness that Kibummie was lamed when Jinki left T.T I'm feeling that there's gonna be some guilt on Jinkis part and possibly some parental issues, but nothing that their love can't overcome.

Can't wait to hear about Kibummie's story ^_^!!!

[raelee92]

(: Heh thanks for your comment dear!

Yep, you're right that plenty of drama would ensue next, but i kind of prepared a surprise for all of you, so please continue to follow this fic! (:

Thanks for all your support !