Comments | rainbow_romeo: Fic: Sticks and Stones

rainbow_romeo

Fic: Sticks and Stones

Feb 22, 2010 19:17

Title: Sticks and Stones
Author: rainbow_romeo
Genre: Slash
Words: ~1600
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Prompt: “Gibbs/DiNozzo, verbal humiliation” from sarkywoman‘s NCIS kink meme
Summary: Tony really is a manwhore.
A/N: Beware major second “B” Gibbs, uber-slut!Tony and overall porn cheesiness

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pairing: gibbs/dinozzo, fandom: ncis, fanfiction, one-shot

Comments 17

louis_alaska February 22 2010, 23:32:12 UTC

Woah. I would not mind at all seeing more of uber-slut!Tony. That's just hot.

rainbow_romeo February 22 2010, 23:44:34 UTC

Glad you enjoyed!
If I find prompts that could fit into this universe of second b Gibbs and uber-slut!tony, I'll consider writing a sequel to this =)

xanthe February 23 2010, 13:08:44 UTC

I can see you got criticism for it, but I really liked the psychology going on here, and there is a hotness to the power exchange going on in particular. I'm surprised people had a problem with the terms - for example the thing about putting cocksucking lips to good use seemed really hot to me as part of their dynamic. I'm more surprised people didn't have a problem with the bartering aspect of Gibbs's affection in exchange for various terms of endearment (or not!) but actually that was what made the story so fascinating to me. I particularly loved that end bit about Tony being a slut and therefore not worth being Gibbs's "boy". It seemed clear to me that it's a game that's turning them both on, and I was very interested in the psychology. Thanks for a really thought provoking fic.

rainbow_romeo February 23 2010, 14:42:44 UTC

Thank you! I'm kind of relieved to know it was possible to understand that.
I can see how some people are made uncomfortable by this, for some reason it always seems to be harder to understand mental kinks than purely physical ones. Well, each to their own. I'm glad to see there are others who get what this is about.
The exchanging affection for sexual gratification thing is actually supposed to make it clear that Tony really, really wants this, but doesn't quite know how to ask for it. I thought it was a fairly obvious pretence in it's weirdness and disproportion. But I don't think too many people care to think that far - I'm content and happy you noticed that that part was important!
Thank you for taking the time to comment so explicitly! =)