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savetomorrow June 27 2011, 13:35:15 UTC
Oh, I love this. It almost feels like a poem.

I think you really captured Mark's feelings about the situation. (An in only 205 words! That's impressive right there. I tend to ramble and rant a lot, so I admire people who can actually say a lot of things with a small amount of words.) It all seems so simple but is actually really complicated, and vice versa. I don't even know. I just love this, okay?

And this:

You may count the notches his teeth make in his bottom lip. You may trace the lines in his forehead with your eyes, and try to guess how many you put there (all of them).

Is my favourite part, even if it does make me want to cry. There's that almost-poetic feeling again, and it's so beautiful.

I hope this comment isn't actually longer than the fic, because that would just be weird. And also, I love your tags. "That damn facebook movie", "mark/eduardo = life ruiners"... sounds about right ;D

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brassbell June 27 2011, 20:22:58 UTC
Wow, thank you so much for the lovely comment! I'm glad you enjoyed this so much. Sorry for making you want to cry, though. D:

Hahaha, it's okay--trust me, I have done more than my fair share of long, LONG comments. XD Tags are so fun, aren't they?

By the way, is your icon from Never Let Me Go? It looks so familiar, but I can't put my finger on it.

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savetomorrow June 27 2011, 20:33:30 UTC
You're welcome ♥ And don't feel bad about making me want to cry - I love fics that have that kind of effect on me, so no worries ;)

Heh, my comments are always stupidly long. I just can't stop typing once I start XD And tags are awesome indeed.

And yeah, it's from NLMG! :D

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chang_hen_ge June 27 2011, 18:00:43 UTC
this gave me ouchies (in the best way).

I love succint pain, the way that it leaves you really feeling it afterwards.

Gorgeous and heartbreaking.

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brassbell June 27 2011, 20:23:32 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm thrilled you liked it. :)

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yellowwolf5 June 27 2011, 21:12:23 UTC
aah, the last line absolutely killed me. my hearrrrt.

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brassbell June 27 2011, 23:53:31 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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hellodeer September 13 2011, 16:35:17 UTC
You may trace the lines in his forehead with your eyes, and try to guess how many you put there (all of them).

;____________________________________________;

This hurts so bad and so so good. Angst in my veins, oh god. I like this so very much, because it's sad and true and it makes me feel so many feelings. Just, you know. I don't know what you did this to me but I'm glad you did.

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brassbell September 14 2011, 22:51:20 UTC
I'm sorry that it hurts to read, but I'm glad you liked it. :)

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