FF: Mommy Dearest

[ralst]

Fandom: Murder in Suburbia
Pairing: Ash/Scribbs
A/N: It's nearly half five in the morning and I'm surfing the big insomnia mind fatigue wave. So I doubt this makes sense. Actually, I doubt this is in English. It's just a bit of free association drivel.

Comments

[cathydalek]

Ash liked children. She did. They were small people who had yet to learn the intricacies of wife-swapping or the right dose of sleeping pills to administer so your unsuspecting spouse was kept in a semi-coma while you cavorted with the nubile next door neighbour and squandered the life savings. They were innocent. Sweet. Cherubic.

Love the opening paragraph. Funniest thing i've read all day.

[nico_1]

Scribbs played a blinder there, no wonder Ash couldn't resist getting back together with her in the end. Great little story, thanks, it cheered my evening up :)

[mrswoman]

I wonder how it is you write the English so wonderfully :)

This was smashing.

[crimsonwhisper]

"How about sex in the car?"

"Only if you're wearing a seat belt."

I am still giggling at that line. Great stuff.