The Ponytail

Jun 06, 2011 16:12


Title: The Ponytail
Pairing: Elijah/Orlando
Rating:R
Disclaimer: No I don’t own them, yes this is made up.
Feedback: As always, any is much appreciated.
Notes: for moit , who requested an Orlijah in which Orlando has long hair tied back in a ponytail.  This is basically hair porn.

The Ponytail )

elijah/orlando

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moit June 6 2011, 16:21:12 UTC

LOL! What an ending!

Ohhh, this was perfect, me dear, just perfect. Thank you so much!! &hearts

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randomdarling June 7 2011, 10:00:37 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it - thanks for the prompt, it was fun to write! :)

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lijahlover June 7 2011, 06:49:13 UTC
Well hell that was hot!

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randomdarling June 7 2011, 10:01:03 UTC
Haha, thank you for reading and commenting, I'm glad you thought so! :)

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ph34rmoi July 5 2011, 20:39:38 UTC
HAHA.

He’s got as far as tiptoeing out to the kitchen to fetch the scissors, then clutching them inches from Orlando’s face, aware that to a bystander he’d look like a murderer.

Cracked me up! Also: extraordinarily hot. Mmm, what an ending.

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randomdarling July 6 2011, 10:09:51 UTC
Thank you very much for leaving such lovely feedback! I'm pleased you enjoyed this. :)

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ingrid44 August 10 2011, 06:21:36 UTC
Don't know how I managed to overlook this story but I've just finished reading and had a good chuckle. I feel exactly like Elijah - love the man with his long hair. But I'll go further and admit to hating, positively hating ponytails. Free flowing locks just asking for hands to thread through them - ohhhhhhhhh. But such heresy - Elijah thinking of cutting off Orli's hair! Sacrilege!
But he redeemed himself.......'tangling his hands in Orlando's liberated hair.' What fun.

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randomdarling August 13 2011, 13:38:06 UTC
Thank you very much for your lovely comment! I'm like you - the curls are perfect, but a ponytail is just horrible. :P I'm glad to hear you liked this. :)

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moit September 24 2012, 04:10:35 UTC
I was reading through my recs and had to read this again. MMM!

Love it so much! What must I do to get more? *grabs nearest pen and waits with a grin*

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