[ES21] S.h.a.t.t.e.r

Nov 17, 2007 09:50

S.h.a.t.t.e.r

Author: Ranier
Series: Eyeshield 21
Rating: G (I never thought I would write an ES21 fanfic without him--this rating hurts in a lot of ways)
Summary: [Spoiler chp. 258] Facing monster made of human flesh and the hereafter. [Hiruma x Mamori]

... lifeline threatened... )

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hUu~ darkbluechocie November 17 2007, 18:40:21 UTC
aww...
this is a very sweet fic..
i cried reading this..
mamori is one tough girl...
well done on your well written fic..
hiruma getting injured is sure a nightmare...
i wonder where he was when this event took place...
^-^

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hellosugah November 18 2007, 09:35:13 UTC
This was beautifully written, although I hope the two months part isn't right - I want Hiruma to play in the CB! :)

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T___T dreadwings November 18 2007, 11:42:42 UTC
I wanna cry again.... nicely written T__T

Well, I just read that the average healing time for a humerus fracture is usually 120 days, not to mention the rehabilitation afterwards. But I think there are modern treatments that can help accelerate the healing time but still not enough T__T

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anonymous November 18 2007, 15:13:56 UTC
I don't know why I read a fanfic based on chap 258 when it was already so sad. Still, wonderfully written and great capture of the impact his injury has on the team and Mamori's faith (love the bit where she corrects the doctor. Hiruma IS still an athlete, his spirit WILL mend, dammit)
2 months can seem like forever, I know. Broke my leg in a b-ball game after being tripped. Ref kicked the other girl outta the game, but it didn't matter. Pain, pain, pain, a big honkin' cast on my foot, and benchwarming the rest of the season. Any sport, any league, anytime: be it opening day or playoffs, intramural or pro, injuries bite.
Poor Hiruma. ;__;
~Ludi-Cola

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damn2es1mutt November 18 2007, 21:17:51 UTC
I cried so hard at the panel that showed his right arm...

Very nice fic.

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