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raspberryichigo

X-Men: Ten Things Bobby Drake Knows About St. John Allerdyce (that no one else does)

Apr 13, 2008 17:45

Title: Ten Things Bobby Drake Knows About St. John Allerdyce (that no one else does)
Fandom: X-Men: The Movie
Characters/Pairings: Bobby Drake (Iceman), St. John Allerdyce (Pyro)
Rating: PG (just because)
Genre: List format! :D
Word Count: ~500
Notes: This was fun! I like doing these list-things. There's one more following this...

( John isn't really some kind of runaway street kid. )

x-men: iceman, x-men: john, type: list fic, x-men: bobby, series: x-men (comic), x-men: pyro

Comments 16

blackeyedwicca April 14 2008, 02:02:39 UTC

Oooooh, this is really good too ^^

raspberryichigo April 14 2008, 22:15:58 UTC

Ahaha! Thank you! :D

transitive111 April 14 2008, 02:46:11 UTC

Aww that was so sweet. I love it. Very touching and realistic.

raspberryichigo April 14 2008, 22:16:47 UTC

Ah, thank you so much! I'm glad you thought it was realistic. :]

gala_apples April 14 2008, 07:01:39 UTC

john will come back <33333

all the rest were really good, but statement #1 was amazing. great job!

raspberryichigo April 14 2008, 22:27:18 UTC

♥! I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for commenting!

sendthewolves April 14 2008, 10:57:49 UTC

Awww, this is great :D I really enjoyed reading it!

raspberryichigo April 14 2008, 22:40:01 UTC

Thanks! It's awesome that you liked reading it! :D

openedbook April 14 2008, 20:37:17 UTC

I liked staement 1. Not like, all of it.
Just the first part,. Liked it a lot. If it was me writing, I prolly woul've left it at that. The n the 'being' thing was kinda neat. I think it's always fun to use the verb 'to be' just by itself.

raspberryichigo April 14 2008, 22:44:50 UTC

Um. Well, okay, I'm glad you liked #1. Including the other statements was a personal, artistic choice, but thanks for the insight!